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Original Posting 2022/01/01
Happy New Year!

Yep, it's that time again. Celebrations, lots of fun, and... maybe a little pause to consider what you want to accomplish this year. I'm seeing several writers regroup, making lists of things they want to tackle this year, and thought maybe you might like to do that...

I mean, one of the things about New Year's resolutions is that they are goals you set for yourself, and you get to decide how public or private you want to keep them. But it is a good turning point to sit back and consider...

Do you want to join a writing group? There are online versions around. Critiques, writing prompts, and other helps to keep you going. (Psst? Take a look at https://moreoddsthanends.home.blog/ if you want to join in a weekly challenge!)

Or maybe you just want to set yourself a goal of writing at a certain time or place regularly? Lots of people find that discipline useful.

Maybe take a book, or some other guideline, and work your way through the approach they suggest? Hero's Journey, Save the Cat!, there is a lot of guidance out there, take your pick. But set yourself a goal, and work on it!

For that matter, take the plunge and plan on posting something here on Writers from time to time! Weekly, monthly, whatever works for you. As I used to suggest, either a post about technique (aka tech!) or a submission (sub!) are good ways to participate.

Heck, close your eyes, and let your dreams take wing. What kinds of things could you see yourself doing, what do you wish you were doing, what do you really want to try? I'm sure there are many ways to go, and you can make your own this year!

Anyway, might be a good time to sit back, and think about what you want to achieve this year. Then think about how to do it, what are the steps, the habits, all that to get there. And, of course, decide to start. One step, just to get started....

Write!
[identity profile] mbarker.livejournal.com
Original posting 19 November 2007

Quoting Ben:
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> How does one handle the enormous word counts?
[snip]
Hi, Ben.

I've been thinking about that question of how to handle lots of words.

I kind of think the real answer might be like the one about how to eat an elephant - one bite at a time. So then the question is how do you divvy up the pile?

There's some different answers to that one, and like Kipling's ways to sing the tribal lays, they are all right. So look for what works for you. Plenty of people find a deadline, a quota, a goal of some kind works for them. Show them the goal and stand back, because they're off and running. That's more or less what the nanowrimo challenge does unless you add a bit to it.

There are also plenty of people who are more regular nibblers. They may not be too comfortable with a huge overhanging goal, but ask them to do a short story every week, an exercise on Fridays, or some other regular task, and they'll get it out week after week without missing. Set up a blog or website to collect that stuff and before you know it, they've got a respectable pile of stuff.

Sometimes you can take one of these and translate it into the other. That's really why I think it's important to take the 50K in a month and look at it as 12.5K a week or a mere 1,666 words a day. They may be mathematically identical, but in terms of emotional commitment, they are often very different.

Or toss in the weekend breaks or whatever makes it fit your life. Or you may be more comfortable with a number of hours, a list of scenes or topics, or some other way of carving that old elephant into bites that fit your dentures. When I teach project management, I usually point out that one of the most important measures of a work breakdown structure is whether it makes sense to you, and that's really what we're talking about. Take one skewer of grilled meat a day, and that oliphaunt doesn't look nearly as scary!

In fact, I've recently pulled this trick on a student here who is writing a paper. See, he told me that the paper is due on February 7, so there was lots of time. I asked him to make a list of the steps that he needed to go through to have the paper ready. He looked a little puzzled, but fairly quickly had a list of nine or 10 things. And I suggested that we start at the deadline and work our way back. So final review by the companies might take - oh, say two weeks. And this would take a week or so. Oh, let's skip the New Year season, since that's when everyone will disappear. And . . . suddenly we were looking at needing to start last week in order to get the paper done in time (and we don't have slack in that schedule yet - I think we're going to be in trouble). Anyway, having those intermediate little inch-pebbles helps quite a few of us keep on track.

There's also a group of folks who do a fine job of planning, Might be note cards, character sheets, or one of the design-a-story programs, but they work through their outline/design in some detail first then get into filling out the structure they have drawn up.

I've recently seen Lois McMaster Bujold describing her approach. She says she keeps an outline from the beginning but it is very sketchy, and as she writes, she also fills in the outline and modifies it. She said she probably has as many words in the final outline as in the novel.

Incidentally, I think an important piece is learning how to change up. For example, I am way too likely to get stuck in the research part of articles I am writing - I love digging through the literature and doing little summary papers. I really have to cut myself off and go back to writing the paper, putting together a structure, filling it in, and then smoothing out the whole thing. I have trouble cutting out the extra neat stuff that is really irrelevant, too. Non sequitur is my Achilles heel. I have learned, to some extent, the usefulness of changing formats. Written text, power point slides, and for real brainstorming, I like a big white board. Shifting back and forth when working can help you see the big picture and all those little details, too.

(I also keep side notes, both on paper and in files, of those extra ideas and stuff. Somehow jotting those down gives me the freedom to set them aside for now, instead of having them chew up my attention. And sometimes I even remember later to look at them. Good fodder for quick little followup pieces!)

I guess what I'm saying is to start with an approach that feels comfortable for you, whether that's free writing or carefully laid out writing, but don't be afraid to shift gears as you go along. Maybe you find yourself a bit off track and need to do some surveying and map work before the next step, or maybe you hit an inspiration and want to take off and write while the words are flowing - do it!

Sorry, this isn't a nicely bundled short answer. I'm not sure there is a short answer. Maybe find a hint over in that song about "life's a dance that you learn as you go, as" and writing, the reflection of life in an inky pool, well,
it takes a dash of that spirit too?

Hope something in here helps.
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original posting: Fri, 4 Feb 1994 08:18:19 JST

(I split the subject because Tsirbas really isn't talking about my exercises, but about how to write - I think)

Tsirbas wrote
- Exercises cannot, however, replace the act of actually sitting down
- and writing a complete piece from start to finish with the goal of
- meeting the criteria of some outline or idea one has had.
Well, no, but... I have to admit, I've been in too many places where someone said "Just write" (talk, program, paint, ...) without providing some clues to the pieces. my ski instructor didn't take me to the top of the expert slope and say "Now Ski." There were some preliminaries. Why do chess players practice gambits, positions, closings, and so on?

Or maybe a better illustration is over in the artistic painting field - the instructor rarely sits you down, hands you brush, oils, etc. and says "Now Paint!" First you get to practice and study composition, perspective, colors, etc. In many schools, you'll spend quite a while simply copying "old masters" - imitate this. now do it again. okay, here's another one.

I will admit, some teachers may start by saying "do it" - then start giving out studies, exercises, and so forth based on what they see as your weak spots or abilities needing sharpening. That's testing by doing, and is pretty useful...

Let me suggest that writing suffers from this notion that we can do it "naturally." Admittedly, everyone studies some in school - but does the year of shop that I took in school make me a great cabinet maker? Or the several art classes I had - which came very close to convincing me that I hated the stuff and was totally unable to do it?

Let me suggest where I see the exercises fit. (not just mine, there are books and magazines and so forth stuffed with them)

It's just like painting or any other creative pursuit. There are parts of the process which can be separated out and studied - practiced - independently (these are exercises). While it may seem tedious, even boring or pointless, these provide the basic tools that then are used in the final act. If you want to paint, you may get perspective, color studies, endless copying of old masters, and a whole host of other exercises. Some teachers may start by saying "paint" - and then assign exercises based on what they see you missing. Others just start with a set of basics and move everyone through them.

So - yeah, the exercises don't replace the basic WRITE - FINISH - MARKET cycle. But just like any set of exercises, the skills you learn may very well help you when you try the real game...

Exercises, in most fields, are intended to construct, reinforce, and sharpen desirable habits, models, or patterns of thought, which then carry over into practice. In some cases, the exercise may be extended into something useful in itself, but the main point is to condition the process so that it happens "naturally."

I'm kind of intrigued with your description of Ray Bradbury's process - where did you learn this?

Personally, from his Zen in the Art of Writing and the frequently reprinted one with the silly long name ... usually shortened to "The Thing at the Head of the Stairs" ... I have the impression that he started with at least 10 years of imitating the "old masters." At least one thousand words a day, just imitating - that's exercise! Then he sold a story or two - and went back to imitating for another ten years or so. Then he started his list of words and phrases, and started "intuitive" writing.

I think I could almost depend on my "natural" writing after churning out some 8,000,000 words of imitation... that's roughly 50 to 80 novels he wrote in "exercises" to get to the point of writing short stories "naturally."

Further, the one week crank it and drop it in the mail idea is pretty common to the writers from the "Great Pulp" era. It's where Asimov got blamed for saying first drafts only (as he explains it, he "rewrote" heavily beforehand, but to save paper, only typed it once), Heinlein got a similar reputation, Jack Williamson, the list goes on. Mostly, I think it was economics - the big market was short stories, the pay stunk, you couldn't do much else.

Several mystery writers also had similar notions - and some of them were cranking out whole novels (short, perhaps, but penny dreadfuls...) I know I've seen one of them commenting on a period when s/he wrote one complete novel each week.

Even then - read carefully between the lines, and you see some of these writers spending time "behind the curtains" - lists of words, draft notes, brainstorming, and so forth. I think they did tend to focus on one story, and really work on that one "at the top" during the week - but the other stories were perking...

BTW - as I've related before, I've seen Harlan Ellison (I think) in a publicized stunt write a "brand-new" story during a convention. Tapped away at the typewriter, posted the pages as he finished them, and sold the story. BUT he also had a huge ratty lab notebook (engineer style) that he kept sneaking peeks at... I can believe the "final writing" was new at the convention, but I would dearly love to know what kind of "prewriting" was in that notebook.

[in the following, I grow a bit unrestrained in my wording. Please believe, Tsirbas, that I am not attacking you - I am simply reacting to a notion that I think has caused more trouble for me than I ever would have believed. You are getting the backblast from fighting this evil python for over 20 years... sorry!]
- Creative exercises are of no use to a writer unless he or she, upon
- sitting down to write, is able to let go of all restraint, of all
- preconceptions and all possible criticsms. If upon sitting down, and
- having a brilliant, twisted idea you think, "What will my mother's
- reaction be when she sees this in print?" then you have already set
- limitations on your creativity. No amount of exercises will make you a
- better writer unless you are true to your own personal genius.
time out! number one, while I agree that part of the process of creativity consists of lowering, challenging, and otherwise working around restraints, preconceptions, and fear of criticism, guess what - that's almost exactly the point of the exercises I'm posting! That process CAN be exercised and trained - that's a big part of what DeBono (anyone recognize the CoRT exercises?) has spent some 40 years or so showing people. It ain't just "you got it" or "you ain't" - there are clearly defined ways of helping you slip those bounds.

(in fact, if you're interested, there's a theoretical background that explains why these bounds are so tight, and how the lateral thinking techniques work around them - read The Mechanism of Mind.)

I've personally used these techniques in training people, and my experience is that they work. Try them, and judge for yourself.

number two - there's the "natural writer" notion again - somewhere buried under all that gunk, there is a creative genius waiting to be freed. Simply lay aside all the bonds that life has put upon you, and it will emerge and shatter the world. Drugs, drinking, god I gotta live in the village... maybe acid will free the true genius...

Bull! that's saying the little kid playing with paints against the wall is automatically better than the artist who has spent years learning to do the basics, to the point where the technique "vanishes" and the art appears.

Better yet - consider the old Zen adage, that when you know nothing, trees are trees, and mountains are mountains. When you begin to learn, trees are not trees, and mountains are not mountains. And when you reach the essence of Zen - trees are trees again, and mountains mountains.

Translate that into writing - when you know nothing, stories are stories. Then you start to learn, and nothing seems quite right. And when you really get it down - stories are stories again.

I think most of us are in the "nothing seems quite right" phase - and practicing the basics until they are habitual is one way of getting past that...

sorry - I don't buy the "natural genius" model. that's the approach that takes 100 programmers, sits them down, says "program" - then trashes 99 of them, since they aren't "naturals." guess what - I can take 100, and in 98 of them, make them not just humdrum, but magic gurus that companies are happy to steal. I've done it. And I refuse to play the game of saying if you can't do it natural, you can't do it.

(two go off and play with each other - every time! some things take precedence, I suppose...)

this is a critical point to me. please don't trashcan people - we don't have enough to go around, honest. and that's what the "natural" writer method does.

Every "natural" I've studied, met, spent time with (programmers, writers, potters, painters, and others) has spent quite a bit of blood and sweat, time and energy, learning the basics so well that they can do it "naturally." It's almost offensive to call them "natural" - they are so far from "natural" that mistaking their trained abilities for some kind of natural in-born talent belittles the efforts they have taken to get there. Saying it is "unconscious" now simply means they've worked at it a lot!

Okay? I happen to agree - practice, practice, practice. Some people do it copying old masters, some insist on beating their own way in the wilderness, some prefer nicely packaged little "technique" exercises, some want or need a grand theory to tie it all together, but everyone needs to keep working until they reach the point of "natural" writing... which is highly unnatural!

If you mean you have to practice until writing becomes habitual - I'll agree!

Did I misunderstand you completely? I really hate this idea, and I'm afraid I may have read it into what you wrote, in which case I owe you an apology for dumping this on you...

[again, sorry about the harsh words. I just really hate this notion of "natural genius" with all of its implications for those who "don't have it." No one has it!]

tink
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original posting: Thu, 3 Feb 1994 01:30:03 JST

(being a rather abstract look at the same problem we've been kicking about anne frank, bosnia, area writers, and so forth...)

Start with the notion that people largely think in patterns - A happens, B happens, and people derive a pattern mostly by taking the common elements - most differences are tossed and lost. So the worm in the head builds ruts for itself...

Now, what does communication do? back to the old times - we get to send uncle joe around the other side of the mountain, then listen to him to figure out whether or not to go there. if he just says it's more of the same, skip it. If he says there's good eating around the corner, well, maybe we all take a hike. If he says they's monsters and they is coming this way, for sure we all take a walk the other way...

if he says there are golden temples and nymphs and fawns dancing in the mists, we clobber him on the head and have dinner (what a kidder that uncle joe was - there really were mists around there!)

anyway - the key is that we use communication to extend the territory covered by the ruts the little worm doth spin.

's aright? but suppose (just suppose) that there aren't so many virgin frontiers waiting to be crossed. still there are some interesting possibilities hidden behind or between the silky walls of the ordinary ruts. I.e., while the writer may find the easiest task is simply describing what's on the other side of the mountains, an interesting variation on this is helping the little worm break through and build some new ruts right here at home.

Notice that in any case, the job of the writer is never to simply repeat the well-known plodding ruts. even worms get bored, I guess.

This notion of writing as extending, building anew, breaking down, or reworking the perceptual grid through which we structure experience (virtual, fantasized, actual, whatever) is rather interesting to me. If this be true, then it seems as though humor (which generally involves a sharp change in perceptions) may be an integral tool in the process. For that matter, puns (rather than being a corruption of literary purity) are one of the tightest forms of writing, since they always involve two (or more) meanings (well-rutted patterns) being brought into conflict in a very compact form.

Admittedly, many readers may feel more comfortable with slower alterations in the internal scenery. Walk them along the ruts with just enough new stimuli to let them wallow in their torpid placidity, and they will reward you well for it. But perhaps the writer has claustrophobia and wants to open the windows...

hum - this argues that the writer whose background or context differs from that of the readers may have an easier time constructing a message which provides that taste of strangeness that we learned to love in ancient times (exogamy - the love of the stranger - was a practical necessity to survival of the species, as inbreeding does some very bad things in small groups). At the same time, they may have more difficulty linking their message to the well-known ruts of the readers, and I think most readers need some help in getting up speed before they tear through the edges of their own webs... (remember poor uncle joe!)

writing, then, may be considered as one way to counteract the staleness of inbred thoughts, to avoid being trapped in the labyrinth of tiny little passages that all look just the same.

I like that.
tink
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Original posting: Fri, 29 Jan 1993 16:41:41 JST

Peter, jbutcher, and Karen Lowe (at least),

First for Peter and jbutcher...

- To be honest, I was hoping for that as well as information about
- potential occupational opportunites, the writing market, etc. Is this
- kind of thing normally discussed on here?
-
- I'm interested in the writing market and how to go about getting something
- published, or what the best approach to take is with publishers/magazines/
- newspapers...I don't think I've seen anything on this list yet that addresses

Jane said...
- All you need to do is ask, and I guarantee SOMEONE will
- respond (whether it's what you want to hear or not).

I guess I qualify as SOMEONE, so let me bend your eyes for awhile:-)

I'm fairly sure the serious folks have gotten back to you. I hope so, because I certainly am interested in these questions, and am (possibly) more out of touch with the markets than you are.

You may know all this, but I can suggest you visit your library or bookstore (cripes, you have easy access to both of those with LOTS of English language books *envy*) and look carefully at Writer's Digest books - there's a big hardcover each year (Writer's Market), plus recently a stack of paperbacks for specialties. Despite drawbacks that someone will likely point out, that's probably the best general reference. They also put out a monthly magazine "Writer's Digest", and there's "The Writer" and at least one more whose name I cannot recall which you can usually find in Walden's or B. Dalton's magazine racks.

If the serious folks have something they send by email in answer to questions like this and are on bitnet, could you send me a copy, too?

This next part isn't really answers, more a series of questions I've wrestled with in regard to my writing. I hope they might help you think about "the market".

Now, I'm going to start with a funny question - are you just interested in being published, or do you want money too? I think it makes a significant difference in the markets you're looking at as to how you answer that.

Let me add one more odd question - do you insist on your article (story, poem, etc.) being published exactly the way you wrote it or can the editor change the title, rewrite the lead-in paragraph, and otherwise fit your work to their needs? How you answer that question also affects your markets.

Let me give you an example - (blatant self-plug follows) - if you look at the January 1993 issue of IEEE Software in the book reviews, you'll find a piece with my name on it. I get "paid" with two copies and the book I review (actually, with computer book prices what they are, that's not bad pay:-). But - the editor wrote the lead-in using something I had in mine, and she's never used any of my titles. She also hacked it again, even after I'd seen the approval copy. Not that I'm objecting - we've done this before, and she knows I'm not a stickler about it. In fact, her headlines are much better than my proposals, and she's trying to juggle text, ads, and noisier writers into a product against a deadline, so I don't argue when she makes last-minute changes. In fact, she's told me that's one reason she likes to use my pieces - because I do understand the kind of work she's doing, and let her do it.

The editor also enjoyed that piece because I used an extended metaphor - I said the author reviewed the field of email, and then I talked about him showing us the flowers, cow patties, and other things. Not your ordinary boring technical review, and in the cover I carefully made sure she understood that if she didn't like it, I would redo the piece.

You might say - that's non-fiction, just a book review, that's different. You should read "Grumbles From the Grave" by Robert Heinlein. This is the collected history of an "established writer" trying to get fiction published - a fascinating insight.

And yet another question to help point your self-searching - do you insist on writing fiction or non-fiction? Do you have a specific genre or specialization that you just have to be published in, or is your drive more generous with you? Again, the answer affects how you look at and attack the market.

Oh, one other very off-beat question - do you insist on having your name on your writing? Suppose the editor puts your name on some things, but leaves it off some? Or suppose the editor puts someone else's name on pieces you've written? These are critical questions, especially if you get into some of the newspaper markets.

If you don't mind doing non-fiction (you shouldn't, it's a good field and helps pay the way for many other pursuits), here are some entryways I know that used to be fairly generous - book reviews in many professional magazines (it helps if you work in that field - and then they give you books to read!), small newspapers (weeklies, etc.), your local political office/church/other social group... During grad school, I also wrote a stack of press releases which the PR people happily distributed for me. No name, no pay, and the newspapers tended to rewrite or cut like crazy, but sometimes I could tell where my words had gone. Note that these are largely zero or negative in terms of pay, but they give you practice and help build your clip book. They are also almost entirely non-fiction.

OK, Karen. I've been following the other pieces, but I wanted to comment on this...

- I'm interested in the "Rinky-Dink" Society. Personally, I usually get a
- decent response from my poetry, but am unable to compete with current
- popular forms of poetry. You may have noticed my "Victorian Poetry". I've
- decided to go the Emily Dickinson route, write tons of stuff, publish a few
- and tell the "official" critics to take a flying leap, their grandchildren
- will love my stuff. ;-) Karen Lowe.

whoa! wait a minute. "unable to compete with current forms of poetry"? Karen, I'm the bloody fool around here, you certainly beat my doggerel hands down. You even know what Randy's caesurus are, apparently.

I suppose you mean you don't think you'll make Redbook, or whatever the main mass market pub's are now? I doubt very much if my stuff (poetry, story, or non-fiction) will ever hit that kind of market, but is it important?

I'm afraid I take a little different approach to writing. I don't think there are "winners" per se, in the sense that there is one champ, with everyone else ranked below them. As in certain martial arts and other fields, the question is whether you executed your art as well as you could or not, no matter how other people look at it. Do you really think that the vast majority of marathon racers compete to win? Or do they run against themselves, whether alone or in the midst of others?

Here, do me a favor, would you? Write yourself a poem on the theme of the runner (swimmer, writer, whatever you like) whose only purpose is their own pleasure, and the feelings they have when one day someone stops them and says "You came in first". The unconscious, surprised winner, shall we say? Then, if you like, I'd enjoy reading it.

Karen, I think poets perhaps more than any other branch of writing need to forget about the normal measures for societal accomplishment. You know the plot, at least for artists - starve in a garret, beg, borrow, and steal to let themselves produce their own art in their own way. The rare comedy goes that they are discovered in the nick of time and become rich and famous. The far more common tragedy is that discovery comes too late. And the even more common reality is that (a) they manage to support themselves relatively well, usually doing something else and (b) they make the time and do what they like and (c) they make their own "discovery".

Heck - take several of your poems, and make some copies of them. Go down to your supermarket and find the manager. Point out to him (or her) that bulk natural food cereals don't have a box for the customers to read in the morning, so you'd like to help him offer them a treat - poetry to eat by. Talk him (or her) into putting up a little box, and the explanation of what this is, right beside the bulk cereal. This first set of poems is free for the store. And you have now "been published." But be patient, it gets better.

Watch - those poems will be picked up. And when the stack is nearly gone, you can talk to the store owner about paying you for the next ones (let them suggest a payment, if possible. keep the charge low, but make sure you get paid.) Figure out whether you want to do the copying yourself (to control paper quality) or let them do it. If you want to, talk them into reproducing it themselves but pay you a larger fee (since they can now make as many copies as they want, they may consider it a bargain).

You think I'm kidding, don't you? I just recently (here in Japan) saw something about a guy who's printing his short stories on T-shirts. Apparently they are selling, too.

Maybe that's not the kind of publication and market you're looking for, but please don't tell me you can't compete. You can. Get out there and go for it!

Jane also said

- Please don't be. The majority of us (let me know if I'm wrong) are,
- as yet, unpublished, so have no proof that we are better or worse
- than you (and even then, it's not really proof!) - regardless of what
- certain egotists might think. Do be prepared for some criticism
- and/or some praise, however.
-
- ENJOY!!!!!

I'm not sure if Jane will let me talk (I've got a 20 year old clipbook of newspaper articles and there are other odd bits and pieces around that have my name on them - but they're almost all non-fiction, Jane, and I sure never got paid much:-) To tell you the truth, though, I'm usually looking at my next piece - and so far, that's unpublished.

I can also state categorically from the pieces I've seen printed (and done) that publication has relatively little to do with value - a lot to do with timing, blank empty pages around paid-for ads that the editor has to fill, and other oddities. Let you in on a secret, though. If you don't write it, and don't send it out, the odds of being published are very, very low. If you follow the reverse strategy (write, submit, and keep submitting), the odds increase dramatically! Which reminds me, now I've got to get back to writing.

Heinlein's "recipe" (abridged from memory, 'cause I can't find the book)
1. write
2. finish what you write
3. don't rewrite unless an editor tells you to
4. put it on the market
5. keep it on the market until it sells
(sorry, this isn't very well organized. I got excited, and wanted to get it out this week. I managed to find hideyholes for all my files here, too.)

hope this helps,
mike
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original posting: Mon, 24 Jul 2000 07:27:44 -0400

As the words run around the world, we find...

The Japan Times, 7/21, p. 17
Nourishing One's Own Inner Source of Joy by Toshimi Horiuchi

"One's inner sun is also a major source of joy.  When well cultivated, this sun's spirit pervades one's entire inner world not unlike the haunting loveliness that surrounds myrtle in full bloom, or the delicate crystallization of earth-stones into gems.  In either case, joy is created.  One's inner sun is a joymaker."

<skip a little -- and wonder just which one is myrtle?>

"It is well, then, to put this inner sun to work not only producing gems of joy for oneself but gems of joy to share with others.  When the soul sings out its joy, its echo is heard in the hearts of others like heaven's rays reflected upon a stream of water running through a grassy meadow."

<and the gentle stream rolls on...>

"So as we touch or 'kiss' a gem of joy, a thrill rises up from within because of the very mysteriousness of the event, like a star throbbing in heaven's deepest repose.  When a gem of joy resounds in the depth of the soul, we 'hear' a polished song like the song of the eastern sky embracing the purest dawn.  When we 'see' a gem of joy glittering in the heart of the soul, our spirit sparkles like the western sky reflecting the colors of the setting."

<tumbling synesthesia smooths the edges of our minds to...>

"In this way we infinitely elevate the quality of joy.  We rouse bright waves on the flat surface of life, creating chain reactions that attract and prolong the waves of joy."

Rouse bright waves on the flat surface of life...

Create chain reactions that attract and prolong the waves of joy...

Think about your writing (poesy, short storettes, the occasional friction, perhaps even a dash of non-fiction and light?).  How do you rouse bright waves in your writing?  Have you ever created a chain reaction that attracted and prolonged waves of joy?  What about those gems of joy -- have you seen them in others' writings?  Collected and shared them with others, to see the delight they find in those same facets?  Have you polished and cut the edges of your own gems of joy, kissing them, resounding with their song, sparkling and glittering with all the colors of the sunset?

How do you dig for these gems in yourself?  Where do you find the supersaturated solution that crystallizes around the fragmentary thought, how do you shape and finish your gems, what settings do you use, how do you choose to display the joys?

Tell us about the games that you play with your gems, found, borrowed, or honestly expressed from your own being...

In short (or in long!)...
write?
[identity profile] mbarker.livejournal.com
original posting: Thu, 22 Feb 2001 13:29:33 -0500

As a prelude, allow me to note that deciding what you want to achieve here on WRITERS often goes a long ways towards deciding whether you enjoy the relatively unstructured format or not.  Let's face it, the listowner is a volunteer who doesn't have enough time to do a lot on the list, there really isn't a designated "instructor surrogate" (or even a reasonable facsimile of a guru.  Several unreasonable carbon copies, but those aren't the same thing at all :-)  Matter of fact, mostly we got some people who are learning, just like you and me, and some of us are willing to help out around the edges, which makes the list rumble and mutter and sputter along.  Sometimes the sputter gets pretty damp, but we waddle through.

So, tell me, what are your plans?

From Writing As a Lifelong Skill by Sanford Kaye and

(with some emendations by moi!)

"A good way to ensure your progress in writing is to commit yourself to a realistic set of goals.  Through regular evaluation..., you can adjust these goals to make the most of [your participation]."

"... this conscious decision about what you really want to accomplish and how much you think you can get done... is a contract with yourself to make the best use of your time.  You can continually revise and sharpen your plan."

"Keep in mind that goal setting is only a technique to track and support your continuing development.  You will need plenty of patience and a sense of humor about expectations that are subjected to the stresses and strains of real life.  People who set out to accomplish a goal (especially those who feel they have to make up for something), and tend to forget that an unrealistic plan becomes still another obstacle to learning.  Much of writing is experimentation: finding out what works and what does not work.  No matter how wonderful the textbook... how conscientious your instructor, or how constructive your fellow students, you need a trying-it-out spirit to strengthen your skills."

"Moreover, this search, sometimes fun and often frustrating, is inherent in the medium of words.  Once you feel at home with the idea that you will learn something new each time you write, you can begin to enjoy the satisfaction of doing the best writing you can."

Sanford's worksheet (p. 51) to help you think about your goals...
  1. My demonstrated strengths as a writer:
  2. My most important weakness as a writer:
  3. Things that other people have told me about my writing:
  4. My reasons for wanting to improve my writing:
  5. My specific priorities for improving my writing:
  6. Attitudes I hold that will help me improve my writing:
  7. Attitudes toward writing that may get in the way:
  8. Writing I have read that I like:
  9. Writing I have read that I don't like:
  10. Resources that can help me reach my goals:
Therefore, I hope to achieve the following:




(Wow!  Do you really want to... huh, I never would have guessed.  That much ink?

Are you pondering what I'm pondering, Pinky?
I think so, but how are we going to get a crate of fishnet stockings into the White House?
gnarf...:-)
[identity profile] mbarker.livejournal.com
original posting: Thu, 25 Jan 2001 12:08:00 -0500

Let's take a look at some thoughts from Writing As a Lifelong Skill by Sanford Kaye, ISBN 0-534-22218-8

Up to Now: Your Writing History

(Page 13) Continuing, "Then try to put into words your attitude toward writing.  For some people writing is an act of futility, while for others it plays a crucial role in personal development...."

And for the next slice, write down your attitude toward writing.  What do you feel about writing?  What do you feel while writing?  How are your emotions tied to your writing?

Definition, attitude,...
[identity profile] mbarker.livejournal.com
Original Posting: Tue, 23 Jan 2001 12:40:28 -0500

Let's take a look at some thoughts from Writing As a Lifelong Skill by Sanford Kaye, ISBN 0-534-22218-8

Up to Now: Your Writing History

(Page 13) "Actually, what we mean by 'writing' is not so easily pinned down....  Does writing require an audience?... What accounts for the personal drive to record life in visible, lasting marks on a page, whether or not anyone else ever sees them?  To settle on your own definition you will probably need to sort out the different functions of writing as you have experienced them in your own work and in your reading."

So, for a first stab at the historical venue that is you, what is your definition of writing?  What does it mean to you?  What does it do for you?

Go ahead, think about it!

(Fair warning -- I'm going to send a series of these little exercises, all based on this book.  Let me know if you enjoy them, okay?)

"There are no whole truths; all truths are half-truths. It is trying to treat them as whole truths that plays the devil." Alfred North Whitehead

[identity profile] mbarker.livejournal.com
Original posting: Mon, 27 Aug 2001 20:49:00 -0400

Here we go...

Writing is like sewing empty garments.

Go ahead, explore that relationship, expand that metaphor, ssssssssssssstretch those words!
[identity profile] mbarker.livejournal.com
original posting: Tue, 11 Sep 2001 23:40:51 -0400

On a television program early this morning, they were talking with students in Cherry Hill, NJ, about the high school problems.

A statement made by one student rang oddly in my mind.

"There's just this natural fear of anyone different."

This was the justification for ostracizing and harassment of a local "freak" -- a student who dressed differently, likes Marilyn Manson (who is that?), and otherwise doesn't fit in.

Somehow, this notion that difference in some way justifies fear, anger, hatred... it doesn't ring true to me.  Certainly, we've all heard the tales of pink monkeys, but are we indeed trapped by such reactions, or are we able to look beyond our prejudices and reactions?

Anyway, a suggested exercise:

a.  Pick two of the following 12 emotions.  You may use two dice if you like.

1.  sadness  2. distress  3.  relief  4.  joy 
5.  hate  6. love 7.  fear  8. anticipation 
9.  anger  10.  guilt  11.  gratitude  12. pride

Now, pick a gaggle of characters, and one odd-ball(or ballette, as you decide).

Scene one -- introduce your characters, and establish that the gaggle feels one of your two emotions towards the odd-ball.

Scene two through n -- spend some time exploring those relations, the reactions of the odd-ball, the rising xxxxx of the gaggle, the bystanders joining in and raising the stakes.

Scene n+1 -- revelation.  Somehow, someway, let one or more of the gaggle get a good hard look at what they are doing, and at what walking in the shoes of the odd ball means.  This should result in the shift from the first emotion to the second one.

et diminuendo -- now, let us look at your second emotion, driven by the revelation.

Go ahead, spin that tale, warp those words, let the pink monkey dance on the table tops and humanity triumph!

(What, you don't like this one?  How about another tale, or a poem, based around the "natural fear" of difference?  Perhaps something about endogamy and exogamy?)
[identity profile] mbarker.livejournal.com
original posting: Wed, 26 Dec 2001 22:54:00 -0500

All write!

First, let's assume that one has donned the infinitely slippery robe of the time traveler, and parted the curtain of time, achieving a foothold on the far shore, one year ahead.

Or, of course, you could just wait a year, and there you are again!

Anyway, let's say (for the sake of the argument) that it is next year, about this time.  Got it?

Now, in thinking back, what were the resolutions, habits, turning points, and other wonderfalls that made this year the great year it was in your writing?  What happened?  Tell us (write us a scene) about the disappointments and the glories, the muses and their hot breath.

Flashbacks galore!

Second, of course, let's ask that perennial favorite:  what are your writing resolutions this year?  What do you expect to do to make your writing sing this year?

And, locally, let me ask what you expect to do on this list?  Are you going to SUB:, CRIT:, TECH:, EXER:, WOW:, INT: or FILL:?  What kind of submissions are you going to SUB:?  How do you CRIT: safely and sanely?  What tidbits of TECH:nique do you want to share?  Did your fingers get the EXERCISE: they need?

News of the World Of Writing?  WOW:!

And if the multi-author world of writing gets to you, there's interactives to plot and foil.

Or, by your leave, we may have a bit of fill: some words and thoughts wrapped for the fun of it.

Anyway -- what are your three resolutions for writing this year?

(Okay, you want more than three?  Make them good!)

Do your resolutions match your one year projection?
[identity profile] mbarker.livejournal.com
original posting: Fri, 14 Dec 2001 07:38:14 -0500

I REALLY DON'T DESERVE THIS, BUT…

Here's an exercise that will help you write the best piece of your career.  Ready?

Okay, here's the bones of this exercise (you'll put the meat on while doing it).

First, sit back, relax, and imagine that some time has passed.  You've just gotten the early release of a future anthology or collection containing your best piece (perhaps it's the anniversary release of your works?:-)  In other words, you've become the writer you want to be, and your work has become a part of the public consciousness, and one of your best works has been selected for this.

Now, you flip to your piece, and just before it, there's an introduction written by your favorite author, critic, reviewer of your work, someone who understands your writing and your approach and knows how to tell people what they are about to enjoy, how to lead them into your work so that they get the most possible from it.

Who is that writer?  Who put together that introduction? 

If your work is a novel, the introduction may be several pages long, a short story or poem may have a somewhat shorter introduction.  But what are the key points to that introduction?  What does it point out about your writing?

Stop here, and write down the main points of the introduction.  If you want to, give us the lead sentence, or perhaps the final ringing summary that leads into your work.

Look it over.  Did they miss anything critical about your work?  When you write the letter thanking them for the introduction, what are you going to say?

Go ahead and bask in enjoying that introduction for a few minutes.  Think about how well-deserved it is, how it leads your readers to your work, where this work fits into the rest of your writing.

Then, if you're ready, do the second part of this exercise.  Sit down and write the piece (the poem, short story, essay, novel, or whatever) that they are going to introduce!

[identity profile] mbarker.livejournal.com
original posting: Thu, 24 May 2001 05:12:37 -0400

Simple, sweet, and to the point...

Complete this sentence fragment:
I write because
Then settle down and complicate it.

Go ahead, expound on it, impound it, even plain olde pound on it, but make your point!

Then do it again.  Yes, take that same fragment, and finish it another way.

Do a round 10 or so.  Heck, do a baker's dozen.  Oh, all right, go ahead and do four square and some odd.  (odd?  No, let's do evens!)

Anyway, elucidate the rationales for writing.

Thanks!

"There are no whole truths; all truths are half-truths. It is trying to treat them as whole truths that plays the devil." Alfred North Whitehead

[identity profile] mbarker.livejournal.com
original posting: Tue, 25 Jun 2002 22:32:37 -0400

(Sigh.  Looking for gold here, and there, and ne'er seeing those rainbows springing up from the mists, with the gold out there...so let's put up a pointer, frame the unseen, and otherwise look ahead to what may be!)

Okay!  Let's take a wild swing, and say that the golden era of WRITERS is yet to come.

You, my fine hearties, are going to swing that pick, tote that bail, and build the wonderful, magical wizard of o...oops, that's another story, best told in technicolor (with the horse of a different color prancing the way!)

So, let's assume (for sometimes we must place our thoughts ahead of our aspirations, else we expire?  Go ahead, breathe)...

1.  What would mark the golden era of writers for you?  What would be happening, what would the postings resemble, tell us a few of the subject lines and themes being traded on that day?

2.  What are you going to do to make that happen?  What mix of postings are you sending on that fine sunshiny morning?  What responses do you make when someone trips over your clay feet?  How do you act (or perhaps hold the reaction?) as you trip along those golden cobblestones, up to the tower of writing?

Go ahead.  Dream the future for us, show us what lies ahead in that era of goodwill and fine workshoppery, and then spin us a path to tread that gets us there.

(and his name was Rumpelstiltskin!  And he sneezed when he saw the hay?)
[identity profile] mbarker.livejournal.com
original posting: Wed, 24 Jul 2002 00:22:56 -0400

This last weekend, I took a walk with visitors.  Their little child was terribly excited as we walked along, dashing ahead to look, then running back to tell us what was around the next corner.

I was thinking about that childhood enthusiasm for the little mysteries of "what's around the next corner?"

Perhaps that's the wonder of writing -- you get to decide what's there, hiding around that corner.  And you get to tease us (your reader) into peaking around with you.

What do you think?  What corner is your writing about to peak around?  And how are you going to get me (the reader) to peak with you?

Tell us about the street you're walking down, the corners that hide things, and what lurks around those corners...

write!

[identity profile] mbarker.livejournal.com
original posting: Tue, 27 Aug 2002 21:35:11 -0400

We've all heard about the big six (journey, game, war, machine, organism, society).  These are popular metaphors used by Americans (at least) for many purposes.

But, let's ask, what is writing to you?  What is the metaphor (or simile, if you prefer a little more distance in the equation) that keeps you writing, that makes you smile, that leaves you feeling as if "yes, that's it, that's what writing really is!"?

Writing is a bowl of blueberries?

A red, red wheelbarrow under the sun?

A never-ending fountain of...

Go ahead, what's your metaphor for writing?  Expand on it, pun with it, and let us know.

What is writing?
[identity profile] mbarker.livejournal.com
original posting: Wed, 27 Aug 2003 15:51:53 +0900

Some time ago, in college (yes, they did have colleges back then, and I did attend one), one of the English courses I took had a rather simple exercise.

The professor walked through the class, depositing a 3x5 card on each person's desk.  We then looked at our word -- all a bit unusual, typically something you were going to have to look up in the dictionary to find out the meaning.  Then, of course, we were supposed to write a short story (or at least a scene), using this word in such a way that the meaning would be explained by the context/actions of the story.  I.e., you could not simply explain what the word meant, rather you would provide action/scene/etc. that SHOWED what the word meant.

The professor recommended that we always include such a "learning experience" in our work.  Not more than one in a piece, but there should be something for the reader to learn, and it should be introduced in this subtle way.

For some reason, today's wordsmith mail reminded me of this.  Suppose you wanted to use "dasypygal" in a tale. How would you bring out the pertinent details, and tie this little word into them?

Date: Wed, 27 Aug 2003 00:10:53 -0400
From: Wordsmith <wsmith@wordsmith.org>
To: linguaphile@wordsmith.org
Subject: A.Word.A.Day--dasypygal

dasypygal (da-si-PYE-gul) adjective

   Having hairy buttocks.

[From Greek dasy- (hairy, dense) + pyge (buttocks).]

A related word is dasymeter, an instrument for measuring the..., no, not that,
rather the density of gases. Another related word is callipygian, having a
beautiful behind.
-Anu

  "That way, if they will just turn their caps through 180 degrees, and
   the volume of their in-car stereos down a bit, and pull their trousers
   up over their dasypygal features, there might be hope, yet."
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   Independent (London, UK); Sep 5, 2000.

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from abroad. -James Madison, 4th US president (1751-1836)

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http://wordsmith.org/words/dasypygal.ram

"The skill of writing is to create a context in which other people can think."
Edwin Schlossberg
[identity profile] mbarker.livejournal.com
Original posting: Fri, 07 Mar 2003 23:37:20 -0500

I'm sure most of you know the story.  Basically, the man searching for a hired man walks onto a building site.  He approaches one workman, and asks what he's doing.  The workman looks up with a snarl, "I'm laying bricks, what's it look like?"  He shakes his head and walks on.

He approaches a second worker, and asks what he is doing.  This workman looks up, shakes the chalk line straight, and says, "I'm building a wall."  The man thanks him and walks on.

He approaches a third worker, and asks again.  This workman looks up with a smile, glances up at the clouds, and says, "I'm building a cathedral."  The man reaches down and shakes his hand, hiring him on the spot.

Variations of this story float around, but they all focus on the "mental game" being more important than the physical actions.

So, here's your tasks for today.

1.  Take the theme of this story, and re-cloth it for another venue.  For example, what would be the matching tasks and goal for the dress industry?  Sewing, making a dress, creating romance?  Pick an industry, lay out the tasks, and write it up.  (Bonus points for finding a magazine in that industry and selling them the story!)

2.  Reflect a bit on yourself.  When you write, are you pounding keys? Writing a book?  Or creating a cathedral?  What is your cathedral?

Write!
[identity profile] mbarker.livejournal.com
original posting: Fri, 08 Aug 2003 11:24:22 +0900

August always seems like a lazy time of year, with vacations and summer heat setting the tone.  But month eight also means two-thirds of the year have galloped past.  So it's a good time to trim the sails and lay out a goal, a process, and some games for the trip.

A goal.  This is, as always, a personal choice, but setting a quota seems to work for many.  Set one that's challenging but reachable, okay?  E.g., one piece (story, chapter, essay, poem) a month?  A week?  Or what tickles your fingers to write?

(Or, of course, you could try the challenge!  Just write one piece a week - write, revise, and mail out one piece every week - for a year.  According to legend, everyone who has tried this has been published.  It's a little like those shot glasses of beer every minute - it seems simple, but the cumulative effect is somewhat larger than the shot glasses appear.)

A process.  Here, too, your preferences may vary.  Some like to brainstorm, then outline.  Others free write, write, write.  Hack and slash - er, revise in one grand frenzy, or perhaps a little every day? 

Then finish.  And send it out, even if you still don't think the golden sunset sings quite right.

Then start another.

Or play a game?
  1. Pick a phrase - quotation, overheard fragment, first or last line, whatever you may find - and write from it.  How many ways can you stretch that phrase, twist that metaphor, and make your words dance?
  2. Ah!  Metaphor and simile.  What is and what is like our topic?  Your love is a green tomato, drowsing in the garden?  Or merely like a snail, slipsliding down the dewy rosebush?  Take a metaphor or simile (or two or three) and expand, twist, and play with it.  Turn those tired cliches on their side and see if there's still a new wrinkle or two left in them for you to show us.
  3. Last, but never least, unravel a pop story and redo it as your very own. That movie, old children's story, or whatever you might have around can be the basis for practice.  What's the plot?  Now repopulate it with characters you prefer, change the scenery, and tell us your tale.  Or, if the poetic effect catches your eye, try to imitate it?  What is it about the rhythm, the wording, the imagery, and the moan that makes that line or stanza work?  (p.s.  I'm not sure what moan is doing in there, but it seems to fit, so I'll leave it there.  :-)
So, an antidote for the August doldrums.  Set your goal, refine that process, and play some games.  And see if the winds don't fill your sails, sending you skimming over wordy depths under the blue skies of the Muse.
"Ink runs from the corners of my mouth.
There is no happiness like mine.
I have been eating poetry."  Mark Strand

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