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Original Posting 2022/3/13
We recently had lunch with the wife of a man we have known for quite a few years. He had died recently, less than a month before. And there's the puzzle, which I thought you might like to play with in your story...

1. Imagine a set of characters, and their interactions. Perhaps they have taken trips together, or whatever. And...

2. One of the characters has died. And now, the others are getting together for a lunch, dinner, night out... you decide what they are doing...

3. And tell us what they say to each other. Perhaps one of them has photos from their travels to share? Or at the very least, memories...

I suppose it's a bit dark, but we actually had a pretty good meal. We talked about the various times we had traveled together, and what they remembered. We also looked at photo albums which his wife had kept, and laughed about those young folks and what all they got into...

So, take that party of characters for a time, and see how they deal with the death of one of their members.
Write! 
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Original posting 2022/3/10
What the heck, we haven't done these in a while. The idea is simple. I'll toss out a single line prompt, and... you get to write about it. Some folks will take it as the first line, and continue from there. Others may prefer to embed the prompt in a context, perhaps writing a scene around it. And, naturally, some will simply work the essence of the prompt into their piece, preferring to hint obliquely or even quite blatantly at the idea of the prompt. Basically, feel free to use (or abuse) the prompt any way that suits you, but do try to do a little brainstorming or a little writing with it. So, with that lengthy discussion out of the way, let's see what we might start with today? Oh, how about a classic sort of start?

Once upon a time, there was a gingerbread house in the forest.

There you go! Now, add some characters (yes, you may add children, a witch, elves, or whatever you like), and tell us what happens in that gingerbread house...

Write?
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Original Posting 2022/2/20
Let's see. What's coming up? Feb. 21 is President's Day, May 8 is Mother's Day, May 30 is Memorial Day. Then in June, we've got Juneteenth (what is that?), Father's Day... and the Fourth of July, Independence Day, is a biggie.

Or you can pick a holiday that you like. Christmas, Halloween, Thanksgiving... there's a lot of holidays out there, pick your favorite!

So, what the heck. Pick a holiday, and set a character, maybe a group, maybe a family, in that time, doing... well, whatever. And make us feel a little of the thrill, disappointment, tears, or whatever of that day!

Go for it! 
Write! 
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Original Posting 2022/2/14
Over at https://writingexcuses.com/2022/02/13/17-7-dissecting-influence/ they are dissecting influences. One of the things they mentioned reminded me of something I do from time to time, and I thought I'd toss it out as something you may want to try.

It's simple really. Take your favorite medium, books, short stories, movies, anime, or whatever, and make a list of your favorites. No particular number, but make sure you have several. Then, take a look, and see if there are common themes, subjects, treatments, or whatever that seem to pop up. Usually, you'll find several that share some elements. Go ahead, make a list of those common threads that attract you.

You may want to take them apart a bit. Why is that theme something that resonates with you? Why do you prefer the youngster growing up main character? Of whatever it is... think about what it means to you, and what the key parts of it are.

You may even want to go a bit farther, and think about how to use these themes, character types, plots, or whatever in your own stories and work. After all, if you really love them, you might as well use them to inspire your own work, right?

Heck, you could probably even go ahead and do some sketches, or mix and match tales, and so forth.
Write? 
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Original Posting 2022/2/13
Okay, it's almost Feb. 14, right? So, let's see...

Over here, https://www.goodhousekeeping.com/life/relationships/g38542496/romantic-gifts/ we have a long list of romantic presents?

1. Our Bucket List: A Creative and Inspirational Journal
2. What I Love About You Fill-in-the-Love book
3. Monthly Date Night Subscription box
4. Preserved Roses
5. Conversations and Challenges for Date Night
6. Bamboo Bed Tray

Let's see.. bath stuff, dinner for two at Chesapeake Bay, massage candle, DIY chocolate truffles, a philodendron? It's an eclectic list, but...

Go ahead. Take your romantic couple, and have one of them give the other one something from the Good Housekeeping list of romantic gifts (Or some other romantic gift of your imagination -- a kitten? A puppy? A guppy???). Then tell us what happens... does true romance carry through?
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Original Posting 2022/2/12
So, here we go. Take your favorite movie, or maybe put pick a number from one to one hundred and go over here https://www.filmsite.org/momentsindx1.html (although they seem to have them listed in alphabetical order, which makes it hard to pick number 43 out? Oh, well, pick one!) Heck, visit Rotten Tomatoes or one of the other movie review sites, and see what they have that catches your eye and attention.

Then, try writing it up, other as a short story or longer. Remember, one of the fun pieces of translating from film to writing is that these different mediums have rather different strengths. Somehow, you've got to convey the setting, the background music, all that fun and games of film, in words!

Or at the very least, write up a review, and tell people why they should see that favorite movie of yours. What makes it resonate with you?

Then you might consider what you might change, if you were writing that story? After all, people complain all the time about how films change the story when it goes from writing to film, so feel free to make some modifications going the other way, too.

So, lights, camera, action... write!
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Original posting 2022/2/5
Oho! That’s right, Feb. 14 is Saint Valentine’s Day! Celebrating romantic love, young romance, and all that, right? Also chocolate! You can find out all kinds of stuff at https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Valentine%27s_Day about it, if you like, or just use whatever rumors and vague thoughts you might have rattling around.

So, as writers, what can we do about it? Well, a short story about one of the many themes of this day is certainly possible. Or perhaps a poem? Naturally, you might twist it… what does a vampire do on Valentine’s Day (or night?)? It’s the halfway point for poor February (28 days, three years out of four), which might suggest something. Or maybe… just a chuckle about youngsters and cards and candy and such?

Anyway, I thought some of you might like to take on the challenge of writing a short story, perhaps a 100 word wonder, flash fiction, or whatever? To celebrate the day when love is everywhere, and candy hearts thump?
Write? 
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Original posting 2022/2/4
Watching the opening ceremonies of the Olympics, and I wondered... I've read several science fiction takeoffs on the Olympics, with participants from multiple worlds, sometimes aliens and such. However, offhand, I don't remember a magical Olympics? Your choice, just humans, or add in other creatures. But...

What would an Olympics look like with magic? Who gets to participate, and what events are there? Go ahead, stretch those imaginary athletes and their goals!

Just write!
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Original Posting 2022/1/24
Recently, a friend mentioned that they were feeling down, because they couldn’t go anywhere right now. Vacations, airplane trips, all that kind of thing seems to have disappeared, and many people are feeling somewhat restricted as a result.

I thought about it, and asked them to consider (a) take the little google maps figure for a walk somewhere that is interesting! Admittedly, you can't get the figure to walk inside a shop or have something to eat, but you can take a walk along the middle of the Vegas Strip, or perhaps downtown Paris, or someplace else that you find interesting. Also (b) check out travel websites, videos, and such about a place you are interested in. Heck, go ahead and plan that trip, figure out where you would go and what you would do and... do check YouTube, there are a lot of people putting up tours of their locales right now.

They thought about it, and said it sounded interesting. They admitted, they simply hadn't thought about doing something like that. I will admit, we may not be able to take a physical trip quite as easily as we could just a few years ago, but... there's a lot of access on the web! So take a vacation trip in your own living room!

Obviously, this also works for writers. Yes, a trip to that location would be nice, but... do it on the web, and see just how much you can learn that way.
Then, write! Sure, send us a card, tell us about your virtual vacation, and feel free to say, "Wish you were here!" (or there?) 
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Original posting 2022/1/23
On tv, they had a funny contest. Basically, they provided the tv talents with some pictures, and asked them to make drawings, paintings, art based on the pictures. Then they asked their resident artist to grade the results, and provide his own version…

So, I was thinking. If you wander over to google images (https://www.google.com/imghp?hl=en ) and put a word, phrase, or whatever in, you’ll get a bunch of pictures. So, pick a word, phrase, or something from a poem or story, and see what google images turns up! Pick one of those that appeals to you.

Then, add characters, setting, action… whatever it needs, and make a story. Help us to see that picture, to step into the world you have found, and watch the play!

Okay? And of course, feel free to share the results here.
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Original posting 2022/1/21
Hum, just started reading another book, where the very beginning started simply "It was her birthday." Of course, then they wandered off into how different her birthday was from the normal cake and family celebration expectations, so we understood right away that things were going to be different. Which suggested something to me.

See, here's a few life passages (yes, I googled...)
1. Birth
2. Puberty
3. Marriage
4. Having children
5. Death

Or what about this list:
1. Rite to birthright
2. Rite to Adulthood
3. Right to marriage
4. Rite to Eldership
5. Rite to ancestorship

Or maybe Gail Sheehy's list?
1. Trying 20s -- trying work and partner
2. Catch 30s -- shake and bake
3. Forlorn 40s -- let's try again?
4. Refreshed/Resigned 50s -- let go and renew

Or take your favorite list of problems, starting/ending school, starting/ending work, starting/ending relationships, moving, crime... whatever you like.

Now, turn it inside out. That's right, let your character look at that normal expected stage of life or transition, but with a very unusual and special twist to it. What happened to turn that birthday, that first day of school, that start of a new job into... marvels and wonders? Fear and trembling? Shock and awe? You decide!

Then go from there. What happens next? And then...
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Original Posting 2022/1/20
Hi, ho... over here on Writing Excuses, https://writingexcuses.com/2022/01/16/17-3-chekovs-surprising-yet-inevitable-inverted-gun/ they have a bit of homework at the end of the podcast that I think deserves some attention. The rest of the podcast is a discussion of various examples based around the maxim that if you hang a gun on the mantle in Act I, you should fire the gun in Act III, or at the very least, do something with it!

But the exercise is fairly simple. Basically, take a work in progress (you have one of those, right?). Now, pick a character, a place, a thing, some bit that you included near the beginning that you did not intend to use later on the story. Perhaps a waiter at the diner where the protagonist had breakfast, or the gas station where they filled up the car, or... something that was not intended to be a major player. And... make it one! Write it into the big climax, revise things to make this a major part of the story.

Yes, you may have to do some revision earlier in the story, and in other parts, to really make this work. But that's part of what the exercise is pointing to, is the changes that are needed to make that gun on the mantle shoot someone in the final action.

Remember, as the actors tell us, there are no small parts, only small actors. So, let your character/setting/whatever take the center stage and show you what they can add to your story!
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Original posting 2022/01/16
So, here's a little bit of fun. Pick a place. It can be somewhere you have been, long ago or recently, or a place you have read about or seen on tv, or whatever. Just make it a place that you would like to explore. Think about the setting, the sights, sounds, smells, what you might feel, all of that. Yes, if you like, walk the little Google maps figure along the road and take a look at it!

Now, take a character or three. Perhaps from a work in progress, perhaps someone you would like to get to know, perhaps from a piece of fiction that you enjoyed? Anyway, one, or two, or maybe three. Probably not too many more, because you don't really want a mob scene.

Then, put them in that place. Why are they there? What are they looking for? Go ahead, let them walk around and explore, perhaps have a bite to eat (or did something bite them?), or whatever. Show us that place, seen through the eyes, memories, toes, and whatever of your characters.

Write that up. This may not be a scene you want to put in your work, but it is both a good way to practice describing places (aka settings, or even milieu) and a way to get into the heads of those characters and see what they notice about those places...

Okay? Pick a setting, put some characters in it, and write up what happens when your characters take a stroll through that place.
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Original Posting 2022/01/15
Let's see... I have a random prompt generator, stocked with various bits and pieces. Tell you what. Pick a number between one and six, and see what you got!

1. Problem: Psychosocial and environmental problems. Genre: Overcoming the Monster: Hero and the bad guy. Surprise: abduction, eloping, running away. Oddment: a quilted snake in the living room.
2. Problem: Christmas! Genre: Monster in the house. Plots: Mystery, elementary, my dear Watson. Oddment: dragon kittens in my backpack.
3. Character: firemen (emergency worker). Problem: death of a spouse. Genre: voyage and turn, boldly exploring. Surprise: ask/offer help. Oddment: pictures in the kitchen.
4. Character: private eye. Problem: runaway pet. Genre: whydunit. Surprise: revenge, good payback, forgiveness. Oddment: pictures in the trash.
5. Character: doctor. Problem: change of personal habits. Genre: Quest, seeking and finding. Plot: doing good, diplomatic, long or short fork when eating with elves. Oddment: a jar of plastic ants in the bathroom.
6. Problem: when you get engaged. Genre: tragic plot, failure of a strong character. Surprise: dark secrets, hidden abilities. Oddment: wallet in your luggage.

There you go! I left out some of the odds and ends from the generator, but I think there's enough there to get you started. Take those bits and pieces, add setting, characters, events, and so forth to your taste, and...
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Original Posting 2021/5/21
There is a funny bit going around on Facebook, where some poor guy is whispering into his lady love's ear about how he thinks there is a landscape inside every woman, that needs to be unfolded... it ends with him saying, "Let's construct an assemblage."

Now, admittedly, it's kind of a rough and ready version of romance (when I read it, I was reminded of the old joke about the guy who asks women a fairly rude question, and someone asks what happens? He says he usually gets slapped, but once in a while... constructing an assemblage seems almost as far out). But it suggests an interesting twist.

Take an analogy, a process, something like that. Now, wrap it up in a romantic meeting between your two lovers. You can make it their first date, a somewhat more steamy scene, or even an outright adult scene, but let one of them be trying to lay out this analogy as part of their dialogue.

So, perhaps they see the relationship as a chess game, and they are about to force a checkmate? Or it's like automobile repair, and we're about to make the engine run? Or... go ahead, take your wildest analogy, and wrap it in a romantic dialogue.

Write that scene!

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Original posting 2021/5/19
For some reason, this morning I've got a couple of lines from Love Potion Number Nine running through my head.

"But when I kissed a cop down on thirty-fourth and vine, he broke my little bottle of... love potion number nine!"

Now, you don't need to have that song in your head. Maybe you've got I'm leaving on a jet plane, or Oklahoma, where the wind comes sweeping down the plain, or maybe Tomorrow! Take your pick, there are lots of fine songs just waiting for you to think of them...

Can't think of one? Go visit https://www.bestrandoms.com/random-lyrics and it will give you one of 500 randomly!

And then go ahead, and rewrite that story! Most songs, if you look at them, have a little story wound through their words. The lonely man looking for love, the separation, the wonder of country life, even poor Annie assuring us that the sun will come out tomorrow, whatever. There's a story there. So take that impulse, the characters, the setting, the problem, or whatever catches your attention, and scribble, scribble, scribble!

Tell us that tale, taken out of music land, and transposed into cold electrons. With your own special twist! Wow!

I'm feeling that good vibration...

Go for it.
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Original Posting 2021/5/16
This challenge was actually issued in the context of writing resumes, but I think it works for writing, generally. So, here’s the challenge.

What’s the best bit of advice you have gotten (or given) about writing?

Basically, what’s one point, one idea, one piece of advice about writing that you think everyone should know? Basic, advanced, whatever, what is that one thing that you would point up for us all to pay attention to?

Go ahead. Tell us about it? Feel free to make the point, then give us the story behind it, if you like. Or maybe tell us a story, and then the moral of the story? However you want, let us know about the best advice for writing. Okay?

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 Original posting 11/20/2020

Hey, y'all. On Facebook, I've noticed people challenging each other to give thanks. That's right, think about things in your life that you are thankful for, and say thank you!

Which, of course, could be expanded into a whole little exercise. I mean, there's probably lots of things you are thankful for, and people, and situations, and... hey, you might even want to write a little story, poem, or something about being thankful?

I mean, that old Thanksgiving story of the Pilgrims and the Indians is lots of fun, but maybe you've got another story? About that time when... 

Tell us about a time when you were thankful, or maybe still are thankful? Put us in that setting, make us feel the tension, and the release, and that burst of thanksgiving feeling?

For example...

I remember one fall trip to Ohio, long ago, when we were sitting at the back of the traffic stopped near Wheeling, West Virginia (if I remember correctly). It was two lines of traffic, coming down a long, long slope, curving behind us. My father looked in the mirror, and made some kind of noise. We all looked back, and saw a big truck, barreling full speed down that hill. His brakes had failed. We were right in the path, with nowhere to go.

Then the trucker did the smart thing. He turned, across the median, which was a big drop at that point, and flew across and bounced down the empty lanes on the other side. I have no idea what happened when he hit the little town that lay ahead, or whether he managed to slow down somewhere along the way.

But our family said a big thank you that day, for one smart trucker who took the risk of jumping that truck across instead of just smashing into the cars sitting there.

There you go! So what is your story about being thankful, about giving thanks?
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Repost Date October 10,.2020
Original posting: Sunday, September 30, 2018 8:43 PM

Since you are probably hard at work on those Halloween stories and poems for the contest, let’s see what we can find...

Okay, let's start with this list... 22 party themes, but they could be story themes, too.

https://www.care.com/c/stories/3709/22-halloween-party-themes/

1. Monster Mash
2. Willy Wonka
3. Haunted house
4. Autumn harvest
5. Carnival
6. Murder mystery
7. Freak show
8. Mad scientist
9. Jack-o'-lantern carving
10. Superheroes
11. Graveyard
12. Alice in Wonderland
13. Hollywood
14. Edgar Allan Poe
15. Harry Potter
16. Rocky Horror Picture Show
17. Politicians
18. Pirates
19. UFO
20. Zombies
21. The mummy's curse
22. Gothic

Not quite what you were looking for? How about these 8 uncommon Halloween party themes?

https://www.greenvelope.com/blog/eight-uncommon-halloween-party-themes

1. Creepy Crawly
2. Crime scene
3. A speakeasy
4. Spells and potions
5. Ghouls night in
6. Full moon halloween
7. Murder mystery
8. Dia de los Muertos

Or poke around the web and find a Halloween theme of your own! After all, I know you have the heart of a little boy, in a jar on your desk…
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 Original Posting 7/24/2020
Hi, ho. It's summer doldrums time again? And we're all suffering through COVID, protests, and all kinds of odds and ends, too? Ugh!

Might be a good idea to think about writing, eh? But hold on, let's not drop that notion of stress and toil quite so fast. See, if you google stress factors, or stress factors infographics, you will find all kinds of lists of problems that we all face! Which, of course, might also be causing your characters heartburn. And conflict and stress for characters makes good stories! So, let's take a look....

Over here https://www.mind.org.uk/information-support/types-of-mental-health-problems/stress/causes-of-stress/

They suggest some reasons things cause stress, and suggest that they might be personal, friends and family, employment and study, housing, money, or even happy events (which often cause big changes, and... stress!). They offer several options under each heading, too. So, roll the dice or otherwise pick an area, then pick one or more specifics under that, and... tell us what happens to your character when they face stress in their life! How do they react, what do they try to deal with it, do they overcome it or not?

https://www.webmd.com/balance/guide/causes-of-stress#1

Also offers several lists of stress causes. Work, life, worry... what makes your character fret and fume?

Or, over here, you'll find a list. Just a list! https://images.app.goo.gl/CaprhDPWSovvVrgP6

Feel free to use that to help figure out what is bothering your characters!

Then, of course, put the characters in a scene, add some dialogue, and write, write, write!

Who knows, it might help you get through the summer doldrums!

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