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Original Posting 2022/2/14
Over at https://writingexcuses.com/2022/02/13/17-7-dissecting-influence/ they are dissecting influences. One of the things they mentioned reminded me of something I do from time to time, and I thought I'd toss it out as something you may want to try.

It's simple really. Take your favorite medium, books, short stories, movies, anime, or whatever, and make a list of your favorites. No particular number, but make sure you have several. Then, take a look, and see if there are common themes, subjects, treatments, or whatever that seem to pop up. Usually, you'll find several that share some elements. Go ahead, make a list of those common threads that attract you.

You may want to take them apart a bit. Why is that theme something that resonates with you? Why do you prefer the youngster growing up main character? Of whatever it is... think about what it means to you, and what the key parts of it are.

You may even want to go a bit farther, and think about how to use these themes, character types, plots, or whatever in your own stories and work. After all, if you really love them, you might as well use them to inspire your own work, right?

Heck, you could probably even go ahead and do some sketches, or mix and match tales, and so forth.
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Original posting 2022/01/08
The tv ad says that tomorrow, they're going to have another episode of Hisatsu Shigotonin (Secret Workmen). The funny thing about this is that I've watched the series, and several of the specials, and I'm still looking forward to tomorrow's show, even knowing that it will repeat the formula.

See, these are formula dramas. In this one, there will be some kind of problem, maybe the guys in power pushing around someone, or some kind of bullying. Things will get worse, someone may even die, and... eventually, one of the people who is losing will take their money, usually a fairly small amount, and wander off to the temple where they will offer it. And then... the secret workmen are gathered, and they talk it over. And pick up a bit of the money. Now the music starts playing, and we see the various workmen preparing... a bit of rope, a long nail, this and that. Then they quickly make their way, across the roofs, through the alleys, and otherwise, to wherever the bad guys are, and... they kill them. While the music plays...

Anyway, if you have seen a few of these, you recognize the overall form, and know more or less what is going to happen. Heck, when we all watched Columbo, we knew darn well that he was going to catch that bad guy, one way or another. The fun was finding out just how he was going to do it this time. Same thing with the shigotonin, half the fun is seeing how they manage to kill the bad guys this time around.

There's a certain kind of story that we love to see or read again, and again, and again. Oh, sure, there are variations, but the basic formula really does need to be there.

So, give us that same old story, with a few new decorations, and we'll enjoy it! I mean, when you dance a waltz, you really don't need to do it a whole new way, right? So, get us out there on the dance floor, and lead us through the same old steps, okay?

Write!

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Original Posting 2022/01/02
Hum... over here, https://writingexcuses.com/2021/12/26/16-52-structure-is-a-promise/, they're talking about how the various frameworks, structures, or whatever you like to call them make promises to the reader. For example, there's the hero's journey, seven-point story structure, Save the Cat beats, Hollywood formula, M.I.C.E. Quotient, and various others. Probably some others that I can't think of right now.

Along with the various tropes and so forth of genres! I mean, when you stumble across that first dead body in the living room, you might guess you are in for a mystery ride, with a private eye, or perhaps a detective, or even a funny stranger who just stumbled into things, but you have some idea what is ahead. Lots of suspects, clues and red herrings galore, maybe a chase scene or two, and the infamous gathering where we find out what it all means...

Anyway, it's something to consider. Which frameworks or structures do you like to use? What do they do for you? How do you keep them from becoming too obvious to the reader, and still make it easy for the reader to follow along? What twists or combinations do you use, or might you consider trying?

What about new genres or different ones to try? Want to mix a little romance into your mystery? Or vice versa? How about science fiction or fantasy added to your tale? A bit of historical retrospective? Go ahead, mix them up and see what happens!
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 Original Posting June 28, 2018

Some years ago, on TV, I saw a gentleman teaching drawing. He said that most people tell him they cannot draw, however, he had a simple technique which he said usually resulted in surprisingly good drawings. Then he demonstrated the technique with some students. He took a picture of someone's head, a typical portrait, and asked the students to draw it.

However, instead of showing them the portrait in the normal position, he turned it upside down. So the picture was someone standing on their head.

Oddly enough, this simple change resulted in surprisingly good drawings! The students were surprised at how easily they could draw this portrait standing on its head.

The teacher explained that he thought most people can't really see the picture because they know what they are looking at. They have an image, a model, an idea of what they're looking at, and they can't really see what is in front of them. However, turning it upside down breaks that barrier and forces them to really look at what is there.

So what does that have to do with writing? Well, all too often, I think our characters, our plots, our settings… We can't see them because the tropes, the mental models, our expectations of what we are looking at get in the way.

So, stand on your head. Then write. Break through those tired old cliches and tropes and expectations, look at what is in front of you with new eyes, and... write about it!

You might be surprised at what you will see, once you stand on your head to look!

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Original Posting March 27, 2018

Yes, I did it again. Google "Writing prompts about fairies" and you get a pile of possibilities. And litbridge comes through again, with ten prompts!  http://www.litbridge.com/2013/10/25/creative-writing-prompts-about-fairies/

As usual, the prompts are their's, while the bad commentary is from me! Here we go...

1. Write a story about a fairy who tries very hard to lie.

I guess in these fairy stories, fairies can't lie? I'm pretty sure that Puck, for one, seems to have fun at least shaving the truth?

2. Write a story about a human who is transported to fairyland.

There and back again! Yes, but what happened…

3. Write a story about a character who catches a fairy and tries to tame her.

Catch a fairy, and… You may have to let her go to really see her glow?

4. Write a story about a character who discovers that his or her origin is fairy, and that he or she is part fairy.

Now how did that happen? Oh, a changeling? Anyway, that could explain the wings…

5. Write a story about a woman who believes her human baby was stolen by a fairy and replaced.

The changeling, the baby, and how do you know which one is which? We need a Solomon?

6. Write a story about the life of the tooth fairy.

Always teeth, teeth, teeth. What's a fairy supposed to do!

7. Write a story about a fairy who love to play tricks on humans for fun.

Turnabout is fair play? And what happens when they find out their friend really wasn't to blame.

8. Write a story based on the perspective of fairies who live in an Otherworld.

You mean in your land, the trees don't walk? And the sky actually stays where it was when you woke up? And...

9. Write a story about a scientist who discovers a dying fairy.

And when they die, they disappear? But…

10. Write a story about a world where people who die become fairies.

Kind of like reincarnation, but better!

Lots of fun and games. You could also take a look at the poetry prompts, and consider just writing a story instead of a poetry.

Fairies, gremlins, goblins, all kinds of interesting and funny critters. Why, you never know what you might find sitting under a leaf when you turn it over, do you?

WRITE!
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original posting 14 April 2009

Writer's Digest, February 2009, page 53, offers this contest prompt:

"Three boys decide to go have some fun at the local swimming hole. Shortly after they arrive, something terrible happens." From the Writer's Book of Matches by the staff of fresh boiled peanuts: a literary journal.

Do people still recognize the local swimming hole? Or is that a rural trope that is rapidly aging? We didn't have one in the corner of Maryland where I grew up, but I did learn about the one in Ohio under the willow trees near my grandparents' home. But I'm not sure that everyone recognizes that gathering place for the kids?

You might consider some other places for your three boys to go get in trouble. Or you might even consider switching genders -- where would three girls go to get in trouble?

And, of course, what happened then? Tell us all about it.
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