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 Original Posting April 9, 2019

Deadline April 14! Just in time for taxes! Or maybe showers? Anyway...A private eye, struggling with the death of a close friend, learns something important. They face the moral issue that their 12-year-old son asks them to buy a copy of Playboy magazine. Do they buy it or not? The AI robot in their luggage might be helpful. At the same time, the private eye is trying to find and clean out a safe area. How can they remove the evil players, encourage the good players, and decide whether to let the locals run everything or keep control themselves?Which way did they go? Let's follow them! What, a clue? Or two? Yes, it's...
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 Original posting Feb. 25. 2019

Okay, it looks as if most everybody wants to do a 6x6? So, basically, the idea is simple. Let's pick a start time (this weekend?) and aim to write a story (flash is fine, short story, heck, if someone wants to do poetry, that would be fine. Just write, okay?) each week. So aim at... Sunday, March 10? Send in a sub to the list by or on that day?

Do we want to have a theme, or prompt, or something like that? I mean, I can pretty easily dig up something (take a look at https://www.reddit.com/r/WritingPrompts/ ) and sometimes it's easier to respond to a prompt. Not required, just an aid to help.

Right now, it looks as if Dale, Michelle, Nora, Anthony and I are likely to join in this exercise in crowd-sourced creativity! Even if'n you didn't say anything, if you want to join in, go for it! Write it up, and send it to the list!

Target Dates:
1st sub: March 10
2nd sub: March 17
3rd sub: March 24
4th sub: March 31
5th sub: April 7
6th sub: April 14

So we'll be done in time for taxes? Something like that, anyway. Let the story telling begin! Huddle around the fire, and watch out for the ghosts and ghoulies that go bump in the night, right? Or is there a dead body in the kitchen (no, not for cooking! For a mystery!). Blast off for Mars? Who knows, but here come the stories of our bunch...
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 Original Posting April 1, 2018

Yay for those who are playing along, writing, reading, or even just thinking about it! And here we go, spinning our tales of wonder and wander and all those other er words... blunder? Plunder! Thunder, flounder...

Let’s see. If we’re still sort of using the six themes of fantasy from TVtropes, this week would be... dragons, fairies, knights? Not nights, which would be dark, but those knights in shining armor, or even knights unsung and unarmed, but still doing what they can to make the world a better place? Oh, boy, does TVtropes have a bunch of stuff about this? Here, take a look over here at the knight in shining armor

http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/KnightInShiningArmor

And then poke around a bit, and you’ll know more than you want to about this fairytale motif...

But, as usual, we need to think a bit about an engaging character, where they are trying to go, what gets in the way, and how they respond to and hopefully overcome those problems, conflicts, opposition? We need a hero!

Okay, I’m starting to drift into ear worms and other strangeness, so...

Just remember, we all want to read your story! So get set, and...

Write!
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 Original posting March 30, 2018

For those who may have joined us lately (yes, there is at least one new member), let me explain what’s going on. It’s kind of an exercise, but mostly, it’s a fun chance for us all to stretch our writing muscles by... writing a story every week for six weeks. No particular length, no particular topics, just write a story and post it here (SUB: title and some folks have suggested word count). Now, I did suggest we might try using the fantasy topics this go around, but no one is going to complain if you don’t. The fantasy topics? Dragons, fairies, knights, royalty, unicorns, and wolves, from TVtropes.

This exercise came from an article that I summarized some years ago that suggested that it was a good exercise for writers, largely because it builds the habit of regular writing. Indeed, most of the “make a habit” guides suggest doing something for 30 days to get it set in your routine as a habit, and here we are, doing 6 weeks!

We’ve had round one (last Saturday, March 24, was the first week target), and we are about to hit the second one (tomorrow, March 31). Of course, we wouldn’t object if someone wanted to join in at some point along the way. Or you could always comment on the submissions! CRIT: is the right tag, but we all love hearing comments.

Anyway, that’s why I keep posting prompts and tech and stuff babbling about 6x6. It’s not a lumber size or something, just an easy way to remember 6 weeks, 6 stories.

And, write!
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 Original Posting March 29, 2018

Are you pondering what I’m pondering?

I think so, but how do you get the duck into the hose?

http://www-hsc.usc.edu/~rwatanab/ponderin.htm may help...

Well, today, I was thinking about what to post to push the old 6x6 tales along, and got to wondering what would turn up if I did a google search for “songs about fairies”. And sure enough, there’s a pile of stuff out there...

Let me suggest taking a look at

https://steampunkopera.wordpress.com/2013/04/23/6-songs-about-fairies/

Which talks a bit about fairies, then links to six different songs. Who knows, one of them might just make your story ring, too?

Write, okay? About shoes and ships and sealing-wax, Of cabbages and kings, And why the sea is boiling hot, And whether pigs have wings...

O frabjous day!
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Original Posting March 15, 2018

Okay! Let's see. I've poked a bit at the notion that you might want to do some brainstorming ahead of time, just to limber up the brain and get some ideas percolating. How about this? Something I've noticed helps me when I'm looking for ideas is pretty simple.

Listen to yourself. And to your friends, family, TV, movies, blogs, news... What stories do you tell? What stories do you listen to, watch, enjoy? Which things move you?

Go ahead. Pick out those family stories that get retold every time the clan gets together. Or maybe it's that story about the time when the dentist drilled your tooth before the Novacaine really set in? Or...

You can decide whether you just want to do a straight memoir -- this is the way it happened -- or mix and match, turn your 4th grade teacher into a troll from the depths, add in the aliens... well, whatever. Still, those stories, especially the ones that you find yourself telling to people, are great little story seeds to mix into your stone soup (and don't mind the mixing of metaphors, they are pretty resilient). Go ahead, make a list, make notes when you have been talking with someone, jot down which of the bits and pieces sliding across Facebook really got your dander up and made you think...

There you go. A small collection of ideas, but... all you need is one a week, for the next six weeks. A short sketch, a dramatic moment in life, maybe it's that oddball weekend that you visited Las Vegas and won... oh, you're going to tell the story. Okay!

Where are you from, how did you get where you are, what happened then? What was the most amazing thing that happened in high school? Did you ever have any friends who...

Grab those little life stories that we all trade around all the time. Then polish, twist, and...

WRITE!
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Original Posting March 14, 2018

So, let's see. A likable character faces opposition or conflict, and by his or her own efforts, achieves a worthwhile goal. So we need a character, opposition and conflict, efforts, and a goal? Or maybe start with the character and goal, then the plan to get there, and finally the opposition or conflict, what's going to be in the way?


Heck, start with any of these. Characters, Setting, Plot, or even theme or purpose. Then brainstorm away at the others.

Here, start with a character. Who are they? What are their goals and desires? What are their problems and faults? In your story, what changes?

Or maybe a setting? Where are we? What are the scenes and locations?

Of course, plot is a really common starting place. What threatens the character's self-image? What can go wrong, and what will it cost? What blocks the character, and what are they going to do about it? Think about the events you want to have in your story, and especially the climax. Are you going to have some small try-fail cycles, bumps along the road, before you get to the climax?

Another simple plotting approach is:
1. What is the moment of change that starts the story moving?
2. What is the hook for the reader?
3. What is the story problem?
4. What is the first doorway of no return? What is the point where the main character, the protagonist, commits to solving the problem?
5. What are the complications that they are going to face in trying to achieve that?
6. What is the second doorway of no return? What is the twist, the revelation, the point where the main character figures out how to achieve their goal, and starts into the climax?
7. What is the ending? What is the climax, the character change, and the answer to the story problem?
8. Now go back and consider, what backfill and back story do you need?

Another way to brainstorm about it is answering questions. Here's one set:

1. Where are we? Setting!
2. Who is there? Characters, with their pluses and minuses.
3. Where are we going? What are their goals and motivations?
4. What blocks them? What are the obstacles or opposition?
5. What are they going to do? What are their plans?
That's all kind of background. The story itself revolves around:
6. What's the hook? What's the story question or problem?
7. What background do we need?
8. What's the build up? Lay out the scenes, the information, the turning points, the reveals, the surprises.
9. What's the climax? What is the character change, the plot resolution, the story answer?
10. What is the purpose or theme? You may not be able to answer this until you have written at least a first draft.

Or maybe you want to think about genres? Lots of different lists, here's one from Save the Cat:
1. Monster in the house: a monster, and the house. Something scary, and a restricted field.
2. The Golden Fleece: we are on a quest to get…
3. Out of the bottle: wish fulfillment.
4. Dude with the problem: ordinary guy, extraordinary circumstances
5. Rites of passage: life changes
6. Buddy love. Love stories, odd couples, mismatched…
7. Whydunit. A mystery by any other name.
8. The fool triumphant. The underdog wins!
9. Institutionalized. What happens inside.
10. Superhero. An extraordinary person in an ordinary world.

Take your character, your seed of a plot, or whatever, and try running it into some of these questions, or maybe brainstorm how you would write it up as several of these genres. Remember, it's still early, so you've got time to kick the tires. Next week, we'll start having to actually write a story every week! But, I'll let you do a little preparation if you want to. That way you just have to pick out a story idea and sit down and write, write, write.

Whoosh! All that for a little story? Well, you don't have to. You can just sit down and write by the seat of your pants. Many great writers swear that they just sit down and open a vein, and... the words come. The arguments between seat-of-the-pants writers (pantsers, or discovery writers) and outliners have been going on probably since the first cavemen sat down to tell a story over that new invention, the fire. Frankly, do whichever works for you. Some people swear that thinking about it, outlining and planning, takes all of the excitement and interest out of it, and they just can't write a story once they've done that. Others find that blank page terribly intimidating, and a little bit of brainstorming and planning helps reduce that terror.

And just think! Starting Sunday, March 18, we'll all be scratching our heads and churning out a story (or 6!). So watch for the submissions, starting March 24! Right here on Writers! Okay?

Okay? So who's with me? 6 stories. Any size, but write a story, okay?

Get on your marks...
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original posting 23 Jan 2012

I was pondering this morning the difficulty that we all have with coming up with a story. And yet, when we sit down at lunch, in a coffee shop, or just with the telephone, there never seems to be a shortage of things to talk about.

Did you see...? No? Let me tell you about it.

Did you know...? That's right, and then...

I just don't understand... Back when..., I...

Those daily stories. Pieces from the news, our life, our friends and family, television shows, things we read on the net, we blend all of those bits and pieces into little tales, little stories, with themes and cliffhangers and interest all the time. We describe events and characters, we evoke car accidents, vistas of wonder, little comic scenarios, all kinds of story stuff.

Then we sit down and say, "I want to tell a story." And suddenly... It all goes away.

Maybe instead of telling a story, imagine for a minute that your friend is sitting there. And you want to tell them about that funny thing that happened the other day. Go ahead. Just talk to your friend about that daydream that you had, the strange way that secretary piled the papers on the edge of the desk until they fell off, or whatever it is. Now imagine telling your friend another story, one that you came up with just for fun. Make your friend laugh, make your friend cry, make your friend lean forward and say, "And then what happened?"

Sure, it may not be a great story. But you know, it's a story.
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Original Posting 22 Jan 2012

Okay. Quick ways to get an idea for your very own 6x6 story (or any other story, for that matter).

1. Dictionary!

Almost every online dictionary offers a "word of the day" which can be helpful. For example, over here http://dictionary.reference.com/ they were giving out remora when I wrote this (although the meaning -- an obstacle, hindrance, or obstruction? Wait, I thought a remora was a fish that went with a shark... later! :-) But one word doth not a story make, right? Well...

Go over here http://www.ypass.net/misc/dictionary/index.php?random=1 and you can get a random word. Refresh the page, and you get another one. Plus, you can select verbs and nouns, for example. So you might select a noun, a verb, and another noun -- filling out the pattern noun-verb-noun to make a sentence. E.g. I got "feather ball", "work", and "Norfolk jacket" so I might have a sentence like "The feather ball worked over the Norfolk jacket." Or maybe against? Anyway, you get the idea.

And best of all, http://www.thefreedictionary.com/Dictionary.htm gives you a list of several words, all at once! The start of the list I got was "city, driveway, now, sprint, read, daisy, surveillance, and doily" -- imagine trying to use those in a story? Or just take the five across the top -- homeland, liking, consult, holland, dish.

Anyway, random words from a dictionary sometimes can be the tinder where the fire starts. So pick your words and link them up!

2. Pictures. Nope, dictionaries aren't going to do it? How about pictures? If you google "random pictures" there are sites out there devoted to just this! Although most of them seem to be aimed at funny pictures. Or you could toss something into the google image search and see what you find there. Take a look at CNN -- the Daily Snapshop over here
http://edition.cnn.com/2011/12/06/travel/daily-snapshot/index.html?hpt=hp_bn3 which is actually 7 pictures -- pick one, and tell us what's going on there.

3. Jokes. Oh, did you hear the one about... Yipes! I did a search for jokes, and everybody and their brother seems to have a joke list. However, the first ones I looked at... well, maybe my idea of humor isn't quite what they have? Anyway, yes, if you can find a list of jokes that makes you laugh, you might consider using that as a seed for a story! Just don't yuck it up, okay?

4. Urban Legends. Our friend Snopes over here http://www.snopes.com/ has more urban legends than anyone could read. But hit the randomizer, or the Hot 25, and see if you get inspired. What if... there was some truth in that legend?

5. Plots. Take a look at 20 Master Plots (psst? Try this list, if you like http://writercises.livejournal.com/47510.html ). Or any of the other wonderful lists of plots -- quest, revenge, love, adenture, one against the odds? Or do you prefer journey and return, betrayal and revenge, boy meets girl, overcoming opposition, rescuing the victim, overcoming monsters, finding treasure, sin and redemption, impersonation, comdey, and come to realize? Or... pick a framework or list of plots, and consider doing one. Or part of one? Now, add characters and setting, and write!

6. Quotes. This will take some work. First, go somewhere like http://www.quotationspage.com/random.php3 and take a look at a collection of say 10 random quotes. Pick 3. Now, write your story around those philosophical concepts, those jokes in wordy disguise, those realizations. The hard part here is that random quotes, while typically amusing and witty, often don't exactly suggest characters, scenes, actions, and all that directly. So you will have to work a bit more to wring the story out of the quotes, but... You can do it!

Okay? Some seeds to sprinkle into your 6x6 garden. Then urge them to grow!

and WRITE!
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original posting 4 January 2009

Just in case you were wondering, today's the first day of the 2009 Writers 6x6!

Yeah!

So what does that mean? Well, some of us are going to write one story each week for the next six weeks and put them up here. Somewhere between 300 and 5,000 words. And we will be posting on Saturdays -- so keep your eyes open.

That doesn't mean that we have to stop all the other fun and fantasy. If you want to talk about an interesting insight, go ahead. But I have to admit I'm probably thinking about this week's story. Nothing up this sleeve, and, well, yeah, there's a little pile of scribbly notes in that pocket, but ignore them, here, just pull the curtain across them.

Hey! If you'd like some hints about putting together a story, let's take a look at some of the bits and pieces from Plot And Structure.

The intro talks about the need to get motivated, try stuff, play, get those first drafts out there, and keep going. Good thoughts for the 6x6 scribbling, eh? See http://community.livejournal.com/writercises/157549.html for a little summary, or read the book -- James Scott Bell.

Then there's the notion of LOCK. Lead character, Objective, Confrontation, and Knockout ending. Someone that we want to empathize with, who wants to go somewhere or do something, and runs into conflicts, complications, and problems on the way. And then there's the climax, the knockout ending that makes the reader say, "WOW! I didn't expect that, but it's really satisfying." Over here http://community.livejournal.com/writercises/158673.html is a summary. And this one http://community.livejournal.com/writercises/158902.html talks a little bit more about it, including this handy template:
  • My lead is a [fill in the blank]
  • Her objective is to [fill in the blank]
  • She is confronted by [fill in the blank] who oppose her because [fill in more blanks]
  • The ending will be a knockout when [fill in the final blank]
Fill in the blanks, and you're partway to a story!

But what about the plot? Well, we can use the old standby three act structure. Over here's there's more details http://community.livejournal.com/writercises/159814.html but for now, let's consider it as a disturbance and two doorways. The disturbance is at the beginning, when something takes the hero out of their normal routine. It could be small, or it could be catastrophic -- your choice. But the hero starts moving. The doorways are one-way doorways. The first one commits the hero to the action. This is where the hero decides they are going to do it. And then the complications really start! The second doorway ushers in the climax -- and usually has the hero at their worst, beaten, bleeding, and close to surrender. But then, they turn around, and . . . beat the odds, win the impossible gamble, do it! Simple, right? But it's amazing how many stories and novels use this structure.

What, no ideas yet? Okay, okay, take a look at these. http://community.livejournal.com/writercises/160687.html and http://community.livejournal.com/writercises/160805.html and http://community.livejournal.com/writercises/161770.html all provide some approaches to the fun of ideas. The first one talks about digging into your own beliefs and attitudes. The second one has a number of suggestions about ways to spark ideas. What if, borrow a plot, flip a genre, randomize, and have fun! And the third one helps you decide which ideas are really good -- hook, line, sinker!

And you probably thought this was going to be a quiet session of introspection? Huh. Pick a number from one to six? Got it? Good, here's your quote:
  1. "Determine never to be idle... It is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing." Thomas Jefferson
  2. "We have too many high sounding words, and too few actions that correspond with them." Abigail Adams
  3. "I have witnessed the softening of the hardest of hearts by a simple smile." Goldie Hawn
  4. "My philosophy is that not only are you responsible for your life, but doing the best at this moment puts you in the best place for the next moment." Oprah Winfrey
  5. "For me, it's that I contributed,... That I'm on this planet doing some good and making people happy. That's to me the most important thing, that my hour of television is positive and upbeat and antidote for all the negative stuff going on in life." Ellen DeGeneres
  6. "Nothing is a waste of time if you use the experience wisely." Rodin
Okay? Now, take your quote. What does it mean to you? Can you imagine a character trying to live by it, and having trouble? What kinds of trouble? Go ahead, build on that. Mix well with the LOCK and the disturbance with two doorways. Scramble well, season as needed, and . . . we'll be posting on Saturday.

Do it. Talking about it isn't enough.

Come on, six weeks, you can do it. One little story this week. See you at the storyboards.
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Original posting 8 Jan 2008

Hey, y'all having fun?

I'll admit, I am. I have my little list of ideas, I've picked one and started scratching out notes, and been reminded of a couple of things.

One is a generic approach to getting work done that someone showed me some time ago. Pretty simple really, with four steps.

Step 1. Make a list of ideas. This is the brainstorming part, where you poke around in various places, maybe take a walk through a toy store, pick some random words, or otherwise stoke the furnaces of your imagination. And make a list of possible ideas. Set yourself a quota, and push to get as many as possible. (I also find it useful to just keep adding to the list as I wander through life, bumping into stuff.)

Step 2. Selection. Here is where you pick through the ideas from the list, setting aside those that aren't quite ripe, don't have the oomph for what you want right now, and so forth. Given the realities of writing, you probably need to pick one to work on right now. Doesn't have to be the idea to end all ideas, just something for now.

Step 3. Plan. Take that idea and stretch it out. For a short story, think about characters, setting, scenes, plot. You might use the checklist of questions . . . what checklist? Oh, here's one at
http://community.livejournal.com/writercises/47919.html
Background
  1. Where are we?  (setting)
  2. Who is involved?  (characters, strengths, flaws)
  3. Where are they headed? (goals, motives)
  4. What stops or blocks them? (obstacle(s))
  5. What are they going to do about it? (plans to overcome problems)

    Story

  6. What hook(s) or bait for the reader will I use? (where start)
    What story question do I pose for the reader?
  7. What backfill is needed? (background that needs to be filled in)
  8. What buildup do I want?  (scenes)
  9. What is the climax?
    - how does the character change? (overcome weakness, etc.)
    - how is the plot resolved? (overcome problems and achieve goals)
    - What answer does the reader get to the story question?

    Higher Level

  10. What purpose, moral, or theme am I writing about?
This step is kind of like outlining and such - do what works for you. But I find some time scribbling little notes before I start writing actually helps me.

And then,

Step 4. Write! Sit down, put words down, try to capture that festival hall in your mind through the words. Don't be afraid to start with the ending, then work backwards, or otherwise write things out of order. And most important, don't fret about trying to think it all through, or have the perfect bits and pieces to start with - get something down, then polish and revise.

Simple, right?

So I hope everyone is having fun!

[When is Saturday again? Eeek - only three more days, four if you count today? That's almost tomorrow! Back to work, oh ye of the easily distracted.]

tink again!

[psst? If you came in late, we're in the first week of a six week exercise called 6x6. Simple notion - start writing a story on Sunday, and post it by Saturday night. 300 to 5,000 words. And then do it again. And again. 6 times. So probably on Saturday, or perhaps before that if some of us get in a rush, you'll see some stories posted out here. And maybe along the way, some reflections about the process? Or at least observations about what kind of craziness it takes to do this? :-]

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