[identity profile] mbarker.livejournal.com
Original posting Nov 8 2010

Yesterday was not a particularly productive day for me in terms of straight words for nanowrimo. On the other hand, since I was having trouble concentrating between my wife's volleyball game on television that she likes to insist I look at just for a moment, my continuing battle with my sinuses, and I suspect a bit of self pampering (darn it, it's Sunday, tomorrow I have to look at those student papers, why can't I relax a bit?) ... anyway, with all that going on, I took a step back and spent some time trying to lay out some other scenarios for the future writing. I was doing these in kind of rough bullet format, just a phrase or sentence or two describing what might happen. Also taking a look at the opposition, and considering just what kind of trouble it might raise. Admittedly, this is not direct narrative writing, looking over a character's shoulder at the scene, describing action, setting down dialogue, and all that.

However, I find that I need this kind of rough framework to be very effective at the other stuff. Somehow having a stack of pre-cut scenes in rough form like this lets me focus more on the scene that I'm actually writing right now. It also gives me more traction when I finish a scene -- I can just look at the bullet list and pick up another chunk to work on, instead of spending a while musing on what to do next. Not an outline, nowhere near that level of detail, but just some bullets about what might happen. Some are at the level of "The agents arrive in town" while others have a little more detail about what happens. But they are all just a couple of sentences, waiting for more attention later.

Still, I simply wrote them into the running text that I've been working on. And I counted those words on my nanowrimo total, because I really do think they are part of my writing process. Admittedly, they really need to disappear before the final editing -- each and every one of them needs to be expanded into at the very least one scene, and sometimes more. But getting the ideas started in this kind of bullet list of possibilities, in words, seems to me to be part of the writing. So I count it.

Aha! Over here on the aging nanowrimo notes http://community.livejournal.com/writercises/142578.html I talked about doing this kind of thing at the end of every writing session, putting down some notes about where you are and what you going to do next. Also, when you remember that you need to go back and straighten something out, add foreshadowing, or maybe work on some other pieces later on, make a note! I think one of the dangers of writing is trying to keep it all in our head. Except for short stories, and I'm not even sure about most of them, there's probably more there than we actually can keep in our head. And we have this wonderful trick -- write it down.

So that's today's advice for the nanowrimowers -- write it down. Don't depend on the little grey cells to hold onto that idea, question, point to consider, direction to explore, or whatever. Put it down in black and white, on paper, in a file, somewhere. And for the bonus, you can more easily look across that list for the purposes of rearrangement, selection, or whatever. Okay? Or if you happen to be pausing, put down some bullet points for later expansion. What might happen next? And after that? Wow, there's a chase scene somewhere ahead? Keep that in mind by putting it in the list. So...

WRITE!
[identity profile] mbarker.livejournal.com
aka Write Notes to Yourself

This is especially appropriate for projects that you have to pick up and put down over time, but I think it also might be useful for nanowrimo writers. The notion is very simple -- especially when you're sitting down or stopping your work, even if you think you'll be back soon and you're sure that you'll remember, write yourself some notes. What are you thinking about? What do you want to come back to later? What questions are percolating around in the little grey cells? What do you think you're going to do next right now? Just a line or two to remind you when you come back.

Even those of us who don't have the excuse of growing gray hairs often find that sometimes when coming back to pick up work in progress, you can't quite remember where you were and what you were going to do next. A couple of lines of notes can help resurrect that memory and make the pickup smoother. And when I'll get back to it soon turns into a somewhat more protracted delay than had been expected, those hints and reminders can be lifesavers.

I've been reading the online weekly serial novel Saltation at http://www.korval.com/saltation/ -- the authors are writing this in first draft on the web. And along the way, we've seen a few notes from the authors to themselves, reminders about things that need to be reworked, and such. So here we have an example of working writers who keep these kind of in-progress notes to help themselves stay on track.

I suppose if you want to you can use the Microsoft Word commenting features. I used to simply write these into the document, often with a standard such as Note: and then I could use find to locate them when I was doing revision or editing. As I took care of them, I would remove them, so that the final document wouldn't have any left in it. But while in progress, such embedded reminders to myself were gold. And of course, programs have comments so that you can include them -- and I used to enforce commenting standards on my programming groups.

When you're thinking about organizing and writing a novel -- 50,000 words, hundreds of pages? -- you need to plan on stepping away from the work and coming back. One way to help yourself do that is to make notes about where you're going as you stop. Then when you come back, reading the notes can help you get back into the swing quickly. You may also want to make notes as you're going as you realize various things. Maybe your hero just shot the villain with a crossbow, and you want to remind yourself to go back in revision and have the hero practicing with a crossbow ahead of time. Especially in nanowrimo, you shouldn't stop now and do that revision -- so write yourself a note to remind yourself to do it later. Or maybe you've just written a cute little scene with the hero and sidekick getting the sidekick's hair caught in the car window and having to untangle it. You might want to make a note that the sidekick has long hair, just to make it easier to remember what the sidekick looks like later without having to scramble around rereading your writing.

Admittedly, you don't want to spend all your time making notes to yourself. Still, I think at break times and when you have those "I want to remember this later" or "remind me to do this later" thoughts, writing your thoughts down is good practice. I certainly have found that the great idea I had yesterday that I wanted to remember to do today sometimes isn't quite as easy to remember today as I thought it would be. And it can be really frustrating to know that you had that insight yesterday -- what the heck was it?

Write it down. Scratch paper or notepads are really cheap. And they work fine, even without electronics.
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Scribble while you work - and when you stop, too!

[In regards to the subject line -- do you remember when passing notes in class was considered cheating? And as for writing little notes to yourself while studying and then reading them during the test -- well, most teachers frowned on that? When you're doing nanowrimo, it isn't cheating anymore :-]

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