EXERCISE: Life in a metaphor or two...

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Original posting: Tue, 19 Sep 2000 20:31:00 -0400

Recently, I saw a plaque that consisted of four relatively short chunks of writing (I hesitate to call them poetic, although others might).

The first consisted of several statements about "Life as a rainbow."  The second talked about "life as an unsung song."  Then it ended with two simple lines:

"the beauty of a rainbow may be contemplated in solitude.
The mystery of a song begs to be shared."

I think of this as basically two extended similes (Life is like a cracker, crispy on the outside, dry on the inside, and crunchy when broken...) and then a pair of metaphorical implications (a cracker tastes better with salt [and the silent echoing thought about whether a life also needs a little salt])

Hokay?

So, your job:

1.  Pick two little bits of reality (rainbow, song, tree, pebble, river, hurricane, etc.)
2.  Pick a general thing (life, love, peace of mind, justice, etc.)
3.  Stretch those similes!  Make lists of characteristics of the reality chunks.  You might make a list of the characteristics of the abstraction, too.  Mix and match, compare and contrast, and pick out the ones that really feel powerful.
4.  Arrange into two extended similes and a pair of observations.
5.  Polish, tighten, and make the words twinkle.

Write!