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Original Posting Oct. 10, 2017

And as we slither closer, ever closer to the deadline for the Writers Halloween Contest (remember, get those stories and poems in by October 20!), we take another look at William F. Nolan's book about How to Write Horror Fiction.

Chapter 3 is about horrible imaginings. William starts out with this paragraph...

"Horror is all around us. It fills the news of the day. Woman kidnapped and killed. School bus tumbles over cliff. Terrorist attack destroys church. Commercial airliner goes down and mountains. Cancer claims more victims. Coed brutally raped on campus. Police officers shot in drug sweep. Border raid wipes out village…."

Whoosh. And that was back in 1990! Then William talks about a real-life horror from his life. Murder/suicide in Kansas City.

Horror surrounds us. And William points out that this may be why horror is so popular and effective. "They provide mass therapy, a way to deal with the everyday horrors we all encounter. Horror fiction offers us a way to survive. We are able to control the horror in a way we can never do in real life."

So, how do we separate horror from things that are just sad, unpleasant, disgusting? Well, it's really approach in handling. Horror fiction entertains, along with some chills and thrills. So where might you look for ideas?

Your childhood! As kids, there's a lot of things that are pretty scary. What's in the closet, what's under the bed, what's down the stairs? Think about what you were afraid of as a child, then put that fear in a story.

Grown-up fears? Well, there are primal fears – darkness, being abandoned, dangerous creatures, death. Being lost, waking up alone and helpless somewhere strange, becoming old, finding out that people are not really what you thought they were… What things frighten you as an adult?

How about dreams? Sure, dreams can be scary. Ideas, scenes, bits and pieces. Just grab them fast, because dreams seem to evaporate when you wake up.

Keep a notebook. Plot ideas, of course, in bits and pieces of overheard conversation, description, thoughts you had, story titles, travel notes, research data, scenes and dialogue, odd facts, memories, whatever excites you.

How about the do-it-yourself ending? Here William suggests reading just part of a story, the first half, then set it aside and write your own ending. If it's exciting enough, go back and write your own beginning. Even if the story isn't unique enough, you'll still learn a lot about structure, plotting, and some ideas.

William also suggests taking a look at a list of supernatural beliefs that J. N. Williamson put together as a background for his fiction. 22 possible seeds for your horror! I'm not going to list them all here, you'll need to read the book. But, reincarnation, voodoo, ghosts, fairies, vampires, alien invasion, mummies… There's a few, just for fun.

Finally, William reminds us that having an idea doesn't mean we have a plot. An idea is a seed. How do you turn it into a plot? Ask yourself questions! Who, what, why, where, when, and how are your friends. Figure out what's happening here. Build a beginning, a middle, and an ending. Mix well with characters, locale, threat, and resolution. And bingo! You've got a plot and the story. Now write.

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Original Posting Oct. 2, 2017

Since it's Halloweenie season, I thought I'd poke around at horror a bit. And, at least to start, let me skim something I've got on my shelves – How to Write Horror Fiction by William F. Nolan. Writers Digest Book from 1990. Just looking at the table of contents…

Exploring the dark side, the roots and cellars in which horror ideas sprout. Take me to your monster! Horrible imaginings. Who – or what – goes there? Don't open that door… Building your house of horrors. Planting the hook: a fantasmagoria of spooky openings and ghastly one-liners. Masks, shadows, and surprises. The gory details… Drip, drip, drip? A dip in the pool. When the crypt is sealed.

There you go. A little shiver to start things off, right? So how about a quote from Stephen King, "We make up horrors to help us cope with the real ones."

So, in chapter 1, what do we have? Well, exploring the dark side… "Fear is fun. Being frightened is delicious. We tend to giggle when we're really scared – partly to expel the tension, partly because we're having such a good time."

It's facing fears and going beyond them. We've been brave! William starts off with a little reminiscence about his first book of horror stories. Boris Karloff's Tales of Terror. And pretty soon he was buying Weird Tales.

"Horror, in one form or another, has been with us since the dawn of civilization. The human animal has been, by nature, uncertain and apprehensive; we are in awe of a universe too vast for us to comprehend.…" The dark and tales of terror… Horror!

A little dab of history – Horace Walpole, 1764, with the Castle of Otranto. From which Ann Radcliffe in 1794 writes The Mysteries of Udolpho, a gothic horror. And then, of course, in 1839, we get to Edgar Allen Poe, with Tales of the Grotesque and Arabesque. Oh!

And of course, now we have mass-market horror, movies, and plenty more.

Not to mention, of course, a little thing known as the Writers Halloween Contest!

Watch for monsters crossing… Okay, take me to your monster, coming soon!

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Original Posting Sept. 7, 2017

Well, that's interesting. The wikipedia page on fear  https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Fear has three lists of fears. Any of these might be a useful focus for a scary story, right?

2005 Gallup Poll, adolescents between the ages of 13 and 17, top ten fears were: terrorist attacks, spiders, death, failure, war, heights, criminal or gang violence, being alone, the future, and nuclear war.

Bill Tancer analyzed online queries to produce a list of: flying, heights, clowns, intimacy, death, rejection, people, snakes, failure, and driving.

Then there's a generic common phobias list, "according to surveys": demons and ghosts, the existence of evil powers, cockroaches, spiders, snakes, heights, water, enclosed spaces, tunnels, bridges, needles, social rejection, failure, examinations, and public speaking.

Whoosh! All kinds of things to be scared of, right? And can you make a scary story about it? Sure you can...

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Original Posting 25 Sept 2009

Take your favorite search engine (like, say, Google?).

Type in "10 top phobias"

Run the search.

Fear of spiders, fear of being misjudged, fear of flying, fear of inescapable situations, fear of small spaces, fear of heights, fear of vomit, fear of cancer, fear of  thunderstorms, and fear of the dead?

Or...

Fear of heights, enclosed spaces, dark, snakes, spiders, needles, thunderstorms, having a disease, germs, the number 13?

The only thing we have to fear is fear itself?

Anyway, take a look at the world of phobias.
And write!
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Original posting  23 March 2009

What did you do?

Writer's Digest, March/April 2009, page 59, contest number 17 has the writing prompt:
A 20-something man sits in a taxi in front of his parents' house, trying to find the strength to tell them that he (fill in the blank).
From The Writer's Book of Matches by the staff of fresh boiled peanuts: a literary journal

What would a twentysomething man be afraid to tell his parents?

Feel free to switch the genders here -- that could be a woman sitting in front of her parents' house, too.

Just go ahead and write.
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Original Posting 19 October 2008

It's been a while since I did a search for "writing horror" so let's see . . .

First link is to something about learning how to write a horror novel or horror story? http://horror.fictionfactor.com/ seems to have articles, market listings, and other useful stuff.

How about an article about writing horror? http://www.bellaonline.com/articles/art27954.asp talks about the most important common fears, and proposes a scenario exercise. Let's see - a list of fears? How about these?
Dogs; Flying; Germs; Spiders; Public Crowded Spaces; Closed Confined Spaces; Bridges; Homeless Folk; Clowns; Terrorists; Isolation; Darkness; Loss; Deformity; Physical Pain.
Horror Writers Association? Right over here http://www.horror.org/ with a nice article at http://www.horror.org/writetips-vanbelkom.htm

A three-part series over here:
http://www.writing-world.com/sf/taylor1.shtml
http://www.writing-world.com/sf/taylor2.shtml
http://www.writing-world.com/sf/taylor3.shtml

And many more . . .

But, of course, the key is always simple.

WRITE!
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(hey, did you know we have a Halloween contest going on? Get those poems and stories written, and send them in to [address removed] ASAP -- or at least by Wednesday, Oct. 22! Make the ghosts jump, let the spiders bite, make us shiver :-)
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Original posting 5 October 2007

Let's see. It's Friday, October the Fifth, and the deadline is Monday? Monday is the eighth, fifteenth, twentyoneth? Eep, that's only a couple of weeks away?

Yipes! Let's consider what you might write about. Horrors and fears, right? But which ones?

Okay, pick a number from one to eight. Got it?

Here's what you picked:
  1. Fear of death and danger
  2. Fear of the unknown
  3. Fear of Animals
  4. Fear of School
  5. Fear of Medical
  6. Fear of Failure
  7. Fear of Criticism
  8. Fear of scary things
Now, given a fear, refine it. What exactly is the fear? Go ahead and make a list of between five and ten specific fears in that area. For example, death and danger - starvation, fire, drowning might come to mind. What else? Or maybe animals - do you dislike snakes, insects, spiders, bats, llamas? Medical - there must be enough diseases and such to fill volumes, just pick some that make the sweat run cold on your back.

Think about which ones you know something about. You might want to do a bit of googling to get some details, or just dig into your memory. Remember the time when . . . oh, does that make goosepimples rise? Good!

Or you can take a look at the phobias on the web! Over at http://www.realfears.com/ they will give you a random fear, or you can look around at some of them. Fear of demons?

Don't like that spin of the wheel? How about taking a look at the hierarchy of needs? You remember. Maslow. Physiological, breathing, food, water, sex, sleep, shelter. Safety: security, employment, resources, morals, family, health, property? Love/belonging: friends, family, sexual intimacy. Esteem: self-esteem, confidence, achievement, respect. And that self-actualization one up top, with creativity and such for all? Now flip it, and consider that the loss of these things is a kind of hierarchy of fears. Losing esteem, belonging, safety, and physiological needs will drive a person - well, that's your story!

Again, stretch it out and pick your details. Make a list, think about the alternatives, maybe consider how the dominoes fall. Losing your job may not seem like much, but when the house goes, and then . . .

Then quickly pick the worst possible thing for your character. Suppose that little itch really does turn into the creeping crud, and the best the doctors can come up with is repeated amputations? Choppity-chop, his scalpel went snickersnack?

Okay, let's get started here, there isn't a whole lot of time left to put together a story that makes stomachs clench and tears start, that makes people hold their breath to see how it all comes out, that makes them shiver when they finish!

But you can do it! Let the horrors roll!
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(where is fear of deadlines? That really should be in the list somewhere, shouldn't it?)

[Based on a couple of factor analyses of youthful fears, based on the Fear Survey Schedule. Citation? Okay, take a look at: Shaefer, B. A., Watkinds, M. W., and Burnham, J. J. (2003). Empirical fear profiles among American youth. Behaviour Research and Therapy 41: 1093-1103.
Available at http://www.public.asu.edu/~mwwatkin/Papers/EmpiricalFearProfiles(2003).pdf
Identified five factors:
  1. Fear of death and danger
  2. Fear of the unknown
  3. Fear of Animals
  4. Fear of School/Medical
  5. Fear of Failure/Criticism
There's another one by Burnham, Shaefer, and Giesen (2006) An empirical taxonomy of youths' fears: Cluster analysis of the American fear survey schedule that looks pretty good from the references. This one is a bit harder to get - have to dig through the reference libraries, and - Aha! Got it - six factors, separating school and medical, dropping failure/criticism, but adding fear of scary things. Not much help, actually.]
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original posting: Sun, 5 Oct 1997 12:45:17 EDT

EXERCISE: Fear and Trembling...

Well, well, well...we are in the midst of our halloweenies contest, and you still don't have an idea?  (you could always do a piece about a writer facing a deadline without an idea, and the agonies of that position, but perhaps that is a bit too recursive for you?  a bit too far into the hall of mirrors, reflecting each other each other each other...:)

Let's try an experiment.  First, pick a number from one to six.
1.  Fear is sharp-sighted, and can see things under ground, and much more in the skies.  Cervantes, Don Quixote (1605-15), 1.3.6, tr. Peter Motteux and John Ozell.

2.  Fear is the main source of superstition, and one of the main sources of cruelty.  Bertrand Russell, "An Outline of Intellectual Rubbish," Unpopular Essays (1950).

3.  Neither a man nor a crowd nor a nation can be trusted to act humanely or to think sanely under the influence of great fear.  Bertrand Russell, "An Outline of Intellectual Rubbish," Unpopular Essays (1950).

4. Present fears / Are less than horrible imaginings.  Shakespeare, Macbeth (1605-06), 1.3.137.

5.  Horror causes men to clench their fists, and in horror men join together. Saint-Exupery, Wind, Sand, and Stars (1939), 9.3, tr. Lewis Galantiere.

6.  Penetrating so many secrets, we cease to believe in the unknowable. But there it sits nevertheless, calmly licking its chops.  H. L. Mencken, Minority Report (1956), 364.
So there you have a little bit of a quote about fear...and maybe you could pick again?  One to twelve this time...some of the flavors of horror and fear, as given by the Microsoft Bookshelf thesaurus:
1. fear, healthy fear, dread, awe, respect
2. abject fear, cowardice
3. fright, stage fright
4. wind up, funk, blue funk
5. terror, mortal terror, panic terror
6. state of terror, intimidation, trepidation, alarm, false alarm
7. shock, flutter, flap, tailspin, agitation
8. fit, fit of terror, scare, stampede, panic, panic attack, spasm
9. flight, sauve qui peut
10. the creeps, horror, horripilation, hair on end, cold sweat, blood turning to water
11. consternation, dismay, hopelessness
12. defense mechanism, fight or flight, repression, escapism, avoidance
[The Original Roget's Thesaurus of English Words and Phrases (Americanized Version) is licensed from Longman Group UK Limited. Copyright c 1994 by Longman Group UK Limited. All rights reserved.]

You probably got several words there.  Pick one of them, and think about that particular shiver in the back of the neck, that specific clench in the abdomen, that lovely pasty shade of fear...make yourself remember when you felt that horrified.  What exactly had happened?  What did your mouth feel like?  How about the back of your hand?  Your toes?

[horripilation, incidentally, is "bristling of ... body hair, as from fear or cold; goose bumps" from The American Heritage Dictionary of the English Language, Third Edition copyright c 1992 by Houghton Mifflin Company. Electronic version licensed from INSO Corporation. All rights reserved.]

Now, imagine that your quote was on a little brass plate (or maybe nicely framed, waiting to catch your eye?  how about embodied somehow in another character?  perhaps simply floating in the shared knowledge and understanding of our reality, waiting to be reinvented?)  So there you are, facing your horror (or running from it?) and the words, or at least the sense (or nonsense?), of your quote slaps you hard in the cowardice and stiffens your spine...

(pssst?  Make a list of five ways that your quote and your fears go together--and conflict...)

Now, put it all together.  Imagine a character out there, with fear. What kind of activity are they engaged in?  How many other people are helping or hindering them (don't forget your antagonist!)  Put them into that scene, and make us believe it, make us live it.

Then how does the horror creep in?  Or does it leap from a shadowed alley, drop out of the blue blue sky, or merely slink along on soundless paws, silently pursuing the victim with flickers on the edge of sight?

As the horror grows in power, how does the character struggle?  Do we try to tell people, only to find that they don't believe that the kindly old parish priest doesn't seem to have a shadow?  Do we look around in fright, then start to run, and run, and run...?

(maybe two or three scenes here, with the protagonist investing more and more in fighting the horror, and the horror growing stronger, more pervasive?)

Finally, with the life, liberty, honor, and sanity of the protagonist at stake (or at least whatever stakes you want to put up...not in, just ante up)--does the protagonist face their fear?  Or does the horror remove its face, revealing a truly gruesome gaping hole?  What is the climax, the point toward which your horror story builds?

[you put the right foot in, you shake it all around, then drop it in the pot... you put the left foot in, and stir up the piranha, then let them strip it to the bone... that's how you do the horror stew?]

write 'em up and sub 'em at the Halloweenies Roast, rat here!
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