TECH: Endings (4 of 4)
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Original Posting 13 April 2010
Writers Digest, August 2007, pages 83 and 84 have an article by Colleen Thompson about endings. With a sidebar by her, and a short piece by James Scott Bell about endings. And there's even an exercise about endings! So... hah! The final part of our four-part series on endings. The end of the endings? And we switch authors, to James Scott Bell.
So what does James Scott Bell have to say? "Endings must wrap up your novel in a way that satisfies and surprises you should know the feeling you want to leave the reader with before you start writing. You don't have to know the details, but you do want a destination to aim for."
Then he suggests you avoid these temptations:
Writers Digest, August 2007, pages 83 and 84 have an article by Colleen Thompson about endings. With a sidebar by her, and a short piece by James Scott Bell about endings. And there's even an exercise about endings! So... hah! The final part of our four-part series on endings. The end of the endings? And we switch authors, to James Scott Bell.
So what does James Scott Bell have to say? "Endings must wrap up your novel in a way that satisfies and surprises you should know the feeling you want to leave the reader with before you start writing. You don't have to know the details, but you do want a destination to aim for."
Then he suggests you avoid these temptations:
- Deus ex machina. Someone or something conveniently solves the main characters problem for him, out of the blue. Make sure the main character plays a significant role in the ending.
- Soliloquy. Don't depend on one long character speech in the last chapter to wrap everything up and explain it all.
- Anticlimax. Sometimes the main story finished, but for some reason the author just kept writing. When the fat lady sings, the story is over. Stop.
- Brood about it. Let the story material sink into your brain and spend the time to dream up a great ending. Don't rush this.
- Create several alternative endings, then choose the best. You can even use material from one of the other endings to provide extra twists or depth for the ending you choose.
- Choose a word to describe the mood of your ending.
- Find the music that captures your mood.
- Write your ending, letting the emotions roll, making it memorable. You can always cut it back if you need to, but let yourself go!
- Edit your ending. Work to find just the right final paragraphs or images. Try for resonance -- that feeling that the story is still ringing in your reader's mind even after they've finished the words.