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TECH: How to Finish What You Start – Every Time (Moldy Oldie) (1350 words)

 Original Posting 10/24/2019

Writer's Digest, July 1992, on pages 22-25, had an article by Marshall J. Cook with that title. The subtitle was, "You have a problem – either physical or psychological – and it has brought your writing to a grinding halt. Here's how to get unstuck and get on with your work."Marshall starts with a problem that many of us encounter. You were writing, ideas were tumbling, words and metaphors going, and then… Something happened. The flow stops. "You're stuck in mid-project, and you don't know why."Maybe you've got a barrier, or it's a shipwreck and you're lost? Maybe it's a technical issue, do you have the best point of view, did you start in the right place, should you be writing in present tense? Basically, you're worried. But, here's some ideas to get you going again.First, getting through the impasse. You started okay, but then you're not quite sure how to keep going? Well, try one of these.1. Have a chat with your characters. That's right, start another document, and write a scene where one or more of your characters come in and sit down with you. Then talk! Get to know your characters. You may get some revelations, or maybe it's just simple speech patterns and manners. Then take another look at that outline, and see how the people fit. Some people prefer a character chart, and you can try that if you want. But just talking to them in a scene often does the job.2. Make a bubble map. [I've seen these called idea maps!] This isn't really for exploring characters, but for exploring ideas. Write the subject, idea, topic in the middle of a blank sheet of paper. Then brainstorm, free associate, writing down words and phrases around it. Let it sit for a little while, and then look at it again. Put circles around main ideas, connect them up with lines, and see if a pattern starts to come out.3. Start someplace else! We tend to keep beating her head against the wall in the same place. We've invested so much time and energy, you don't want to waste it. But… Try another character, try another scene, see what else you can tackle. You don't have to write your story step after step, especially when there's a wall in the way. Just go around it!Now, what you do if that doesn't shake it loose. A.k.a, the formless furies? Everything just stopped? Well, let's stop and see what happened. Take a look at these, problems and suggested cures.1. Plato's dilemma. You had this great idea, but the words don't seem to be quite as good. The ideal in your head, and what you got on paper just doesn't match. Don't give up! "The words on the page never match the initial inspiration." But, until you get it on paper, you can't read it, react to it, and improve on it. So keep going.2. Critic on your shoulder. "This stuff stinks. You've got a sarcastic critic perched on your shoulder." Well, who invited that critic! Create first, then judge. Don't get wrapped up in commas, spelling, and all the little niggling details until after you finish the rough draft. Later you can revise, rework, and re-create!3. Writer's blank. Whoops, you don't know what comes next? Well, drop back and do some research and development. Take a look at the overall project, fill in the outline, try out some alternatives.How about nodding doing? Ideas are spewing, you can't wait to get started, but... when you start writing, suddenly you're sleepy, the energy is gone. Well, Marshall suggests thinking about a minor shift in your schedule, or maybe a big shakeup. First, don't do your writing last. If it's the thing that is struggling for every left over minute, it's no wonder it's hard. Give it prime time. Figure out what is the best time for you, and fit your writing in there. Lots of people have two uptimes and two downtimes in their day. Marshall does first drafts during one of those uptimes, and then research and revision at other times. Make sure you've got enough rest, and your diet. You may also want to think about some exercise. Keyboarding really doesn't give your body enough exercise. But, if you schedule your writing times into your productive peaks, and get yourself on a healthy schedule with enough rest, diet, and exercise, you may be surprised at how much energy and enthusiasm you'll find.Fear of finishing! This is a biggie, with two big variations. First is the fear that if you finish this project, you won't have any more ideas. It's a leap of faith time. Usually, struggling with ideas, characters, and plots on one project suggests lots more ideas, characters, and plots for future projects. "Rather than exhausting the well of ideas, writing tends to replenish it." Second is the fear of being an undiscovered writer. Obviously, this is a big concern with traditional press. Luckily, with the indie press, you can publish yourself. But the key things here are Marshall's three points. One. "If you write, you're a writer. You need no one else's validation." Two. Whether your work is rejected or hits the bestseller lists, "If it pleases you, your writing has value." Three. "Writing is a fundamentally healthy, worthwhile, and affirming way to spend time. Do it, first and foremost, for the doing. Fame and fortune are the pesto on the pasta."Marshall finishes up with a brief look at how to decide when to pull the plug on a project. He suggests two questions. First, "Have you retained your enthusiasm for the project?" Not fear or fatigue, but really lacking enthusiasm? Second, "What will my reader get for reading this? Am I offering her something of value for her precious time – useful or interesting information, a few laughs, good company, a glimpse of a world she would otherwise never know?" A sense of purpose, and the commitment to never bore the reader…Write!There are two sidebar articles, both by Marshall J. Cook. The first one, on page 24, suggests some preventative medicine to avoid getting stalled in the first place. First, face and resolve your self-doubts. Talk back to your demons! Think about a writer that inspires you, remind yourself that you want to do this, and ignore the people who think writing is a waste of time. Second, realize that a novel is not written in one day. You write one scene, one bit of dialogue, one step at a time. Break the project into chunks, and give yourself a realistic daily goal. Third, don't tell the story to other people! Fairly often, if you tell the story once, your muse is going to decide you don't need to tell it anymore. So, tell it on paper first. Fourth, don't over control. Bullying your project, trying to force a theme, and so forth are likely to kill the inspiration. Leave room for detours and sidetrips. Now, Marshall adds one little piece of advice from Hemingway. When you stop your work for the day, stop in mid-thought, even midsentence, where you know exactly what comes next. "That way, you'll come back to your writing eager to plunge in. You'll finish that sentence and be off and running."The other sidebar on page 25 is a very brief one about outlining or not outlining. Some people find some sort of outline or map very useful. Other people find that writing from the seat of their pants, spontaneously, works best for them. Marshall's advice? Whatever works for you.So, there you have it. Some advice on restarting when the project seems stuck in the middle. Some ideas about how to handle a frozen project. A little about scheduling. And a few words about fear of finishing. Along with preventive medicine, and a quick look at the never ending controversy between outlining and discovery writing. Quite a lot for a five page article!And, now that you've absorbed all that, let me remind you…WRITE!
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[personal profile] mbarker2023-12-04 03:37 pm

WOW: Do you nano? (500 Words)

 Original Posting 11/01/2019

If you do, you are probably already set up and ready to roll, just as soon as November First starts wherever you are. On the other hand, if you have missed it...It's November! For many writers, that means it's nanowrimo time again! National Novel Writing Month! There's a website (https://nanowrimo.org/) with support, and all that, but the main idea is simple. Toss the internal editor in the back, and write! Aim at 50,000 words (or more! Just because you hit the goal, don't stop now! Keep going!) during the month of November. That means 1,667 words a day, or 12,500 per week. Although I'd recommend doing a bit of overloading or front-loading, because there may be turkeys and other interruptions towards the end of the month. So, say 2,000 words a day, or even 2,500 words a day to start?But part of the fun is not fretting too much about the target, and just settle down and write whatever you can, whatever feels good! Push to do more than you have done before. Try a genre you haven't tried, but always wanted to. Switch from that hackneyed third person to first person (or, for the very adventurous, give second person a try!). Maybe play with present tense instead of the well-trodden past tense?Oh, yeah, there's also the fun of trying discovery writing if you have been an outliner, a planner. Or play with some planning, if you have always done discovery writing.Rediscover the fun of writing! Remember why you wanted to do this stuff, and go ahead and enjoy it for a month!One notion that I've seen a lot of people suggesting is what I might call incremental outlining or planning. Basically, sure, go ahead and at least have a kind of idea of what you want to write, maybe a few of the characters and so forth, but don't worry too much. Then, every day, start out with a little brainstorming and outlining. Probably a scene or two. Set the goals, figure out what you want to have happen in this scene, who you need, and... write! Yes, you may find yourself needing to go back and rearrange scenes or rewrite stuff later, but... don't worry about it for now, we're pushing for words, and more words! Okay? Just write those daily pieces, and we'll fit them into the quilt later.So, even if you haven't tried nano before, let me invite you to join in, and write! Don't worry, you haven't lost much preparation time. Actually, I think you could include whatever preliminary sketches and so forth you want to do before you dive into writing, writing, writing as part of your nanowrimo word count.And when people ask if you nano, you can smile, and say, "Yes!"Go ahead, write! You've got a month to run wild, and an invitation to, as Nike likes to suggest, just do it!
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[personal profile] mbarker2023-12-04 03:41 pm
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NANO: Lester Dent’s Master Fiction Plot?

 Original Posting 11/02/2019

Now, I know, you are going for 50,000 words, not a mere short story. But... you might find this useful for doing short side trips, or just for a twist? Anyway...It’s available several places. One ishttps://mgherron.com/2015/01/lester-dents-pulp-paper-master-fiction-plot-formula/You might also like this summary (several parts!)https://blog.karenwoodward.org/2013/11/lester-dents-short-story-master-formula.htmlLet’s look at what Lester recommends...Start out by brainstorming one or more of these1 A different murder method for the villain to use2 Something different for the villain to be seeking3 A different locale (aka setting!)4 A lurking menace to threaten the heroNext, divvy up your 6000 word story into four 1500 word chunks. This is where you may need to do some variation, since you are shooting for 50,000 total, but... take a look at his four parts. Do you want to just multiply everything by ten, and end up with 60,000 words? Or maybe do multiple 6000 word chunks and stitch them together later? Up to you...First 1500 words.Start, in the first line or as near as possible, to introduce the hero and a fistful of trouble. Give a hint of mystery, menace, a problem to be solved... something the hero must cope with.Next, the hero tries!And as soon as possible, introduce all the characters. Bring them in action.Fourth, the hero’s efforts cause a physical conflict near the end of the first 1500 words.Finally, there is a surprise twist in the plot.This section should have suspense, a menace to the hero, and everything should happen logically.Second 1500 wordsFirst, more trouble for the hero!Which means, second, the hero struggles more.Third, this causes another physical conflict!And, to finish it off, add in another surprising plot twist.Keep the suspense, the menace, and the trouble for the hero coming! Make sure it is logical, too.Third 1500 wordsStart with more trouble!Fighting all this, the hero starts to get ahead, and corners the villain into...A physical conflict!But, sure enough, another plot twist hits, and usually the hero is now in real trouble!Guess what! Suspense, menace, the hero is getting in deeper and deeper, and it all happened logically. Right!Fourth 1500 words?Start with more trouble.The hero is almost buried in trouble, right?But... the hero gets out, through his own efforts, skills, training, ideas...And in the final conflict, the mysteries are cleared up.And there’s one more surprise waiting for us.Plus a punch line to end it all.There it is. 6000 words? Or maybe a framework for a piece of your runaway masterpiece? One square of your quilt?Anyway, keep writing!
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[personal profile] mbarker2023-12-04 03:43 pm
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TECH: Character Arcs (part 9) (770 words)

 Original Posting 11/09/2019

Okay, take a deep breath! So far, Weiland has laid out a conceptual framework, with the Lie the character believes, what the character Wants, what they Need, and the Ghost, the backstory behind the Lie. Then we’ve got the Characteristic Moment that introduces the character, and the Normal World. Plus six beats for the first act, and the first plot point (or first doorway of no return). Next, in Chapter 8, Weiland talks about the first half of the second act. See, the second act is often about half of the total story, so instead of tackling it in one big lump, Weiland suggests breaking it into three parts, the first half, the midpoint, and the second half. In this chapter, she’s only talking about the first half.So what is happening, now that we’ve gone past the first plot point and ventured into unknown territory? Well, usually the character gets lost! And starts to discover that the Lie may not be as strong as they thought it was. Whoops! Reacting to the first plot point, and still chasing the Wants, he’s in trouble, whether he knows it or not. He’s going to be doing things, and learning that some ways to achieve the goal just don’t work.So, what landmarks do we include in the first half of the second act?1 Provide tools to overcome the Lie. Not everything, but at least a few hints, pieces of the puzzle, to get started. Information on how to overcome the Lie! Advice, perhaps, along with physical skills they will need for the climax. Some Truths to unsettle the lie, and useful truths.2 Show difficulties pursuing the Lie. Let the character try out the old ways, and... run into problems. The Lie is going to get in the way, here in the second act. So, some of the character’s approaches will evolve. He’s going to see the failures, and start looking for ways to change.3 Move closer to what he wants and farther from what he needs. The balance is shifting, but... it’s the wrong way! The character is working harder than ever to get what they want, and letting what they need slip away. While still seemingly moving towards the goal. But... the inner conflict is growing, even if they seem to be winning on the outside.4 Give the character a glimpse of life without The Lie. Probably from other characters, but it might be a personal glimpse. Let them start to wonder, to see some flaws in that Lie.Questions for the first half of the second act? Sure...1 How does the character react to stepping through the first doorway of no return, the first plot point?2 What tools can you give your character to start getting ready to break the Lie?3. What minor character (or characters) can mentor your hero, either through example or advice? What do they do or say?4 How could you show the hero the first step towards breaking the Lie?5 How will the character try to use the Lie to solve the plot problems?6 What will go wrong when they try this?7 What is the character’s reaction to these failures? What do they learn, how do they adjust? What do they try?8 How does the hero’s focus on the plot goal push him closer to what he Wants?9 How does getting closer to what he Wants pull him away from what he Needs?10 After stepping through the first doorway of no return, past the first plot point, how does the new world (or the changed normal world) give the hero a glimpse of life without the Lie?In the first half of the second act, your character is going to try very hard to reach the plot goal. He’s trying to get control and beat the conflict, and it might even seem to be working. But actually, it’s running away, with the Lie and the Want breaking down.This is where you can really explore the character, their personality, beliefs, and desires. Lots of chances for fun, conflict-filled scenes!Exercise? Try sketching out three to five possible scenes or bits for each of the four landmarks that Weiland recommends. Now, add in other scenes that you want or think might fit in this part. And try laying them out in different sequences. What happens if you do this one first, and that one last? Go ahead, play with it!Watch out, because the midpoint is coming. Our reactive hero is about to flip, and become active. But that’s the next episode!
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NANO: Word counting in the night?

 Original Posting 11/20/2019

Are you nano'ing? Yep, we're at about day 20! So two-thirds of the way through? Let's see, if you use the Nanowrimo target of 50,000, you should have roughly 33,333... and spare words in your bag? And be looking at that final spurt, just 16,667 more to go?If you wrote in order (order? What's that? Oh, you mean a burger and fries? Nah, I'm busy now, maybe later...), then you may be thinking about the final climax, the big face-off where your hero (I need a hero... no, no, no earwurms now! But it's a pretty good song? And cool video, too. https://youtu.be/bWcASV2sey0 ) Where was I? Oh, yeah, your hero faces the big bad, and with a little luck, pluck, and a lot of effort... WINS!Or maybe you're figuring out some odds and ends to stuff in to keep the words coming? Hey, play the game of interviewing your characters, or taking a tour of the setting, or even reading the newspaper report about the amazing events? Whatever keeps your creative flames burning, right?So -- the good news is, we've done 20 days of nano, nano! And there's just 10 more days to go! So... write, write, write until broad daylight... ( Rock around the clock? Bill Haley does this one https://youtu.be/7sjQAvEVbtA This one has fun video! https://youtu.be/Ud_JZcC0tHI ... Oh, right, write!)(This distraction brought to you by the letter Q on your keyboard!)Now, go write. Words!
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[personal profile] mbarker2023-12-04 03:54 pm
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TECH: Character Arcs (part 10) (700 words)

 Original Posting 11/22/2019

Aha! Chapter Nine is all about the midpoint. Wait, isn’t that something from plotting? Well, yes. Weiland is tying the positive change arc, the internal changes and growth, to the external plot points. The midpoint, where the character faces up to things, is one place where the two rub up against each other pretty obviously. So...Weiland starts by reminding us that in the positive change arc, the protagonist spends the first half of Act two lost in this new land, making mistakes based on false assumptions, and getting his hands (and probably other parts of his anatomy) slapped repeatedly. But he’s learning things! He’s starting to figure it out. And... here comes the midpoint!Big change! The character at least turns away from the effects of the Lie, even if he doesn’t repudiate the Lie yet. The character also goes from reactive to active. This is where the story swings, if you will (see James Scott Bell’s Write Your Novel From the Middle if you want to know more about the magic of the midpoint!).So, why does the character shift from reactive to active? Well, Weiland suggests it comes from the middle of the character arc!The moment of truth, the moment of grace, the mirror moment... this is where the character takes a good, long look at the external conflict and at his own self, and accepts the Truth! Where he sees what he really wants, and where he is really going.Now, often this does not mean the character flat out dumps the Lie. But... he sees there is another side, and starts to act in line with that. He is, in point of fact, stuck between the Lie and the new Truth!The Midpoint is usually a big, important scene, but that shift in personal knowledge is often a subtle thing. Still, make it a solid, dramatic change if you can.Weiland has a number of examples you may want to read through to see more about how the midpoint and the change in the character go together.And, of course, Weiland provides a set of questions to help with the character’s arc at the midpoint.1 What personal revelation does your protagonist have at the midpoint?2 How has the protagonist changed between the first plot point and the midpoint?3 How does the revelation at midpoint give the character enough knowledge to start taking control, and move from reaction to action?4 What definitive action with the character take against the opposition?5 What new understanding of the conflict does the character get at the midpoint?6 What new understanding of himself does the character get at the midpoint?7 What is the moment of truth for your character? What does he accept and understand in that moment? What makes him see it?8 How is the character still, at least superficially, holding onto the Lie?9 What is he going to do based on the Truth?10 How does the conflict between the superficial Lie and the deeper Truth make the inner conflict evolve?The midpoint is where your character gets it, and starts changing his actions to really start winning.Weiland concludes, “ When planning your Midpoint, identify the Truth your character must recognize and create a mind-blowing scene to support it. Done right, it will end up being one of the most memorable chapters in your book.”So, there you go! Halfway from the first doorway of no return, with the second half of Act two ahead, and the second doorway of no return still to come. But... the big shift has hit, and the character is working towards the Truth. They’ve seen that burning bush, the dream of honor, or whatever, and are going to start working towards that.Exercise? I think probably the best one is to do something like what Weiland did with her examples. Take books or stories you like, maybe some of yours, and figure out what the midpoint is in them. Look for that glimpse of what’s behind the conflict, and the realization of what it means. Write it up, in a here’s the glimpse, and here’s what it means to the character format.Then come back for our next episode, when we’ll look at the second half of Act two!