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writercises2008-07-22 10:24 am
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EXERCISE: Transformations...
original posting: Mon, 19 Nov 2001 13:47:58 -0500
Okay, let's try this...
"Lit up like a whorehouse on Saturday night." Loren D. Estleman, quoted in Falser than a Weeping Crocodile and other similes by Elyse Sommer and Mike Sommer.
There's a fine phrase, talking about something being lit up. But since we're stretching our writing muscles, let's consider two things.
First, what might you be writing about that would be lit up? Can you think of a scene that would need some description around how well lit up it is?
Second, of course, let's consider a few variations on that simile. What would you consider using as a simile to illustrate being lit up? What does it do if you make it "lit up like a Parisian whorehouse on Saturday night?" Or what about "as dark as a whorehouse on Monday night?" (er...when's the night off?)
Times Square at the stroke of midnight, Jan. 1?
like a four year old's face when Daddy comes home?
Go ahead, crank out a few similes about being well lit! And then consider the effect they have on a scene.
If you like, go ahead and write the scene.
Or even the whole tale, if you have the time and the idea.
Okay, let's try this...
"Lit up like a whorehouse on Saturday night." Loren D. Estleman, quoted in Falser than a Weeping Crocodile and other similes by Elyse Sommer and Mike Sommer.
There's a fine phrase, talking about something being lit up. But since we're stretching our writing muscles, let's consider two things.
First, what might you be writing about that would be lit up? Can you think of a scene that would need some description around how well lit up it is?
Second, of course, let's consider a few variations on that simile. What would you consider using as a simile to illustrate being lit up? What does it do if you make it "lit up like a Parisian whorehouse on Saturday night?" Or what about "as dark as a whorehouse on Monday night?" (er...when's the night off?)
Times Square at the stroke of midnight, Jan. 1?
like a four year old's face when Daddy comes home?
Go ahead, crank out a few similes about being well lit! And then consider the effect they have on a scene.
If you like, go ahead and write the scene.
Or even the whole tale, if you have the time and the idea.