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writercises2008-07-27 10:54 am
mbarker.livejournal.com) wrote in writercises2008-07-27 10:54 am
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EXERCISE: What Was That?
Original Posting: Thu, 28 Jun 2001 04:09:34 -0400
Passive, but perhaps it's a place to start?
Take that first line (rewrite if you must those hoary grey words) and then continue the tale, enhancing our knowledge of who sniffs in the hospital and so forth.
Write?
There was the scent of cinnamon and apples baking wafting down the hospital corridors.
Passive, but perhaps it's a place to start?
Take that first line (rewrite if you must those hoary grey words) and then continue the tale, enhancing our knowledge of who sniffs in the hospital and so forth.
Write?